Talk:Mahmoud Kahraba/GA1
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Latest comment: 6 years ago by Courcelles in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 21:55, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
- I'll do this one. Courcelles (talk) 21:55, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
- I know it is in the lead, but we should still have a BLP-compliant citation after "was terminated with Luzern citing inappropriate behaviour."
- "an option to make the deal permanent, in August 2013." Who had that option? Him? Luzern?
- FC Zürich is the article title, with the diacritic.
- Similarly, Grasshopper Club Zürich
- "loan feal with" typo.
- "he squad,[16] He " Either decapitalise "He" or turn that comma into a period.
- "substitute infor place of"
- "2–2 fraw with"
- " squad for their UEFA Champions League " Should likely use the link to whichever UEFA CL this was, rather than to the general article.
- "agreeing a transfer to" Agreeing to a transfer to
- Wikilink Egyptian Pounds, better yet if you can convert it into hard currency.
- "was fined 500,00 Egyptian pounds" Either that comma is in the wrong place, or we need an extra 0.
- "Atletico" Make sure you're consistent with the diacritics on the e
- "requires surgery." Requires? Future tense?
- "defeats to Uruguay, Russia Saudi Arabia" Needs an and
- Ref 2 needs more details and formatting.
- Ref 51 needs an access date.
- Bunch of quirky nitpicks, really that's all. Courcelles (talk) 22:14, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
- @Courcelles: Thanks for another review. I've addressed all of the issues above, let me know what you think. Kosack (talk) 06:50, 28 July 2018 (UTC)
- Looks good, promoting. Courcelles (talk) 15:11, 28 July 2018 (UTC)