Talk:Kaiser Max-class ironclad (1875)

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Parsecboy in topic GA Review
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Vego states that Kaiser Max was transferred to the Yugoslavs as a hulk in March 1921 and was renamed Tivat. He also says that all four of the hulks that were transferred to Yugoslavia were discarded in 1924. My research into the Royal Yugoslav Navy has turned up no mention of any of the four hulks after 1924, so, combined with Vego, it is very doubtful that Tivat was retained beyond 1924. Rene Greger (pp. 136–137) states that both Don Juan d'Austria and Kaiser Max were converted to accommodation hulks in 1909, the former at Pola and the latter at the Bay of Cattaro. He also states that the former was sunk accidentally in 1919. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 06:10, 14 October 2016 (UTC)Reply

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 06:52, 14 October 2016 (UTC)Reply

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1. Well-written:
  1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.
  • the dimension conversions to feet are in decimal, but should probably be in ftin
    • Good point
  • 24-cal etc needs explanation
    • The article is linked - that's usually sufficient
  • The 47 and 25 mm guns in the infobox are listed and converted in cm, not mm
    • Whoops, good catch
  1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.
2. Verifiable with no original research:
  2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
  2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
  • There is a sentence which needs a citation, I've tagged it.
    • Fixed
  2c. it contains no original research.
  2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism.
3. Broad in its coverage:
  3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
  3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
  4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
  5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
  6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.
  • No date of publication for SMS Kaiser Max.jpg or SMS Don Juan d'Austria.tif
  6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
  7. Overall assessment. On hold for seven days for a few points to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:25, 14 October 2016 (UTC)Passing, all points addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 22:52, 18 October 2016 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for reviewing the article, Peacemaker. Parsecboy (talk) 18:49, 14 October 2016 (UTC)Reply
No prob. Just the image licensing thing to address now. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 02:37, 15 October 2016 (UTC)Reply