Talk:Kaki Bukit MRT station/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 05:03, 8 August 2023 (UTC)

Hi! Will review within a week. ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 05:03, 8 August 2023 (UTC)

Interesting read—on hold; over to you. Please ping me when you are done. :] Thanks, ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 17:08, 9 August 2023 (UTC)

Nice work on the changes! I am now happy to pass this article for GA status. Congrats! ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 12:24, 13 August 2023 (UTC)

Copyvio check

Earwig says good to go.

File(s)

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Prose

• In the lead, "Kaki Bukit, Singapore" should be wikilinked to Kaki Bukit, Singapore instead.
  • Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 04:06, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
• "August 2010 when the DTL Stage 3 (DTL 3)" – the acronym is not needed here as DTL 3 is not used again in the lead and the acronym is mentioned later in the body anyways.
  • Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 04:06, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
• "21-kilometre (13 mi) Downtown line" – wikilink Downtown line as first menion in the body.
  • Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 04:06, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
• "widened the adjacent roads, Jalan Tenaga and Jalan Damai," – the previous sentence says that Jalan Tenaga and Jalan Damai were closed? Or is this referring to a segment of the road? I would make this clearer, in that case.
  • Er, I said "A segment of Kaki Bukit Avenue 1 from Jalan Tenaga to Jalan Damai".--ZKang123 (talk) 04:06, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
• I reckon public art could be wikilinked for unfamiliar readers.
  • Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 04:06, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
• "It is a video" – how about "The artwork consists of a video" to avoid any ambiguity with it here? The next sentence can be changed to "It intends to reflect".
  • I prefer The artwork is a video installation. Reword.--ZKang123 (talk) 04:06, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
• I would note Singapore's four official languages.
  • Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 04:06, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
• "for this artwork project" could probably be removed.
  • Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 04:06, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
• Apologies if this is something obvious that I am missng, but what does "that wouldn't have all three change simultaneously" mean?
  • Basically it's a video installation of three screens. So over time the message in each screen will change.--ZKang123 (talk) 04:06, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

Refs

Passes spotcheck on refs 4, 7, 8 and 16.

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