Talk:Katherine Clark/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Grammarxxx (talk · contribs) 00:08, 3 January 2014 (UTC)

Quick response, huh? But really, right off the back, this article is not GA material, but let's try to fix that.

Early concerns

• Try to have this article have a style similar to the other MA Congressional Reps (they're almost all GA's)
• Infobox dates - I know they're hard to find, but let's try to get exact dates for taking and leaving office
• The intro's a tad short, and doesn't focus on her career (what has she done, what's it matter if she lives in Melrose?)
• "Early life, education, and law career" - there isn't enough of any of that stuff in the article
• House & Senate - combine these two sections and add more
• "2013 congressional election" - again, needs more info and to be in a general "U.S. House..." section

This is a good place to start, but there is more to be done. Grammarxxx ^{(What'd I do this time?)} 00:08, 3 January 2014 (UTC)