Talk:Keanolani/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by KAVEBEAR in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 00:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 00:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a  Y
    1.b  Y
  • 2
    2.a  Y
    2.b  Y
    2.c  Y
    2.d  Y
  • 3
    3.a  Y
    3.b  Y
  • 4
    4.a  Y
  • 5
    5.a  Y
  • 6
    6.a  Y
    6.b  Y
  • No DAB links  Y
  • No dead links  Y
  • No missing citations  Y

Prose Suggestions

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Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

  • You may want to expand the lead, possibly including facts about her illegitimacy, or her death.
  • Her father's husband Keaupuni was not biological father as was later attested by Mele, a witness in the divorce suit between him and Maheha in 1855. I think this is garbled, I believe it should be:
    Her husband Keaupuni was not the biological father of the baby as was later attested by Mele, a witness in the divorce suit between him and Maheha in 1855.