Talk:Kelly Kelly/GA1
Latest comment: 13 years ago by NiciVampireHeart in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:04, 17 March 2011 (UTC)
I will review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:04, 17 March 2011 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
- "She made her debut on the first episode of the weekly television program, June 13, 2006," modify a bit, perhaps 'of the weekly television program on June..'
- "On the October 29 episode of Raw, Kelly won a battle royal, to earn a match" comma after royal not needed
- "She made her debut on the April 30 episode of SmackDown," comma not needed
- "She went on to feud with Lay-Cool, gaining and ally in Tiffany." an ally
- The WWE external link is a 404, looks like they again modified all their roster links on the site.
- Fixed url. NiciVampireHeart 12:29, 19 March 2011 (UTC)
I'll put the article on hold and will pass it once those issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:16, 19 March 2011 (UTC)
- All completed. Thanks for the review. NiciVampireHeart 12:29, 19 March 2011 (UTC)
- No problem. Everything looks good now, so article passes as a GA. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:32, 19 March 2011 (UTC)
- Great. Thanks so much. NiciVampireHeart 20:26, 19 March 2011 (UTC)
- No problem. Everything looks good now, so article passes as a GA. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:32, 19 March 2011 (UTC)