Talk:Kelvin Tan

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Former good articleKelvin Tan was one of the Music good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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January 4, 2014Peer reviewNot reviewed
January 17, 2014Good article nomineeListed
October 20, 2024Good article reassessmentDelisted
Current status: Delisted good article

Possible vandalism

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Could someone please review the recent edits by User:137.132.3.6. Many of the user's other edits are barely sneaky vandalism, and that leads these edits to be suspect. I don't know the subject enough to know. Thanks - Taxman Talk 13:11, 19 October 2005 (UTC)Reply

BIOGRAPHY

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Name 姓名: Tan Wei Lian 陈伟联

Date of Birth 出生日期: 05/10/1981

Age 年龄: 23

Horoscope 星座: Libra 天秤座

Blood Type 血型: O

Nationality 国籍: Singaporean 新加坡

Height 身高: 170cm

Weight 体重: 68kg

Occupation 职业:Freelance musician 街头艺人

Schools Attended 就读学校: Singapore School For The Visually Handicapped 新加坡视障儿童学校; Dunearn Secondary School 德能中学

Why did he join this competition? 参加“绝对Superstar”的原因:To gain experience in big competitions. 吸取大型比赛的经验。

His performing experience 请列出你的舞台经验:Small-scale outdoor performances.小型户外表演。

Who is his singing coach? 歌唱老师是谁?: Himself(自己)

Fave music genre (s) 最喜欢的音乐类型:Chinese Ballads 中文抒情歌曲

Fave singers (s) 最喜欢的歌手:Fish Leong, S.H.E, Li Shengjie 梁静茹、S.H.E、李圣杰

What is the song which you sing best & WHY? 你最拿手的一首歌是? 为什么?: I’m Not Lonely On A Lonely Night (Gu Dan De Ye Li Wo Bu Gu Dan) because I can deliver the emotions in the song. “孤单的夜里我不孤单”,我可以将歌曲的感情表达出来。

At what age did you dream of becoming a star? 几岁开始发明星梦?: 14 十四岁。

Which part of your body do you think has the most star quality? 你觉得你的身体哪一部分最有星味?: Vocal Cords 声线

Who is your greatest competitor? What are his/her strengths? 谁是你的头号劲敌,他的优势是:It’s still early into the competition. 比赛才刚开始呢。

If I win, I will... 如果我夺得冠军,我会...: Go home and rest for as long as I can. 回家休息,休息越久越好。

If I don’t win, it’s because of... 如果我输了,绝对是因为...: My looks. 我的长相。

Describe yourself in 4 words 请用4个字形容你自己: Humorous, cheerful, friendly, outgoing 幽默、开朗、友善、外向


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Suggestions for improvement

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  1. The personal data portion seems like it is copied from some fan site. It should be rewritten in verbose form as much as possible.
  2. The upcoming events portion is totally unnecessary. Remember, this is an encyclopedia article, NOT a fan site!
Kengbeng 07:28, 24 February 2006 (UTC)Reply
I agree. It is rather obvious that the article is subjectively written, slanting in favour of Kelvin Tan while glossing over his negative points. Also, I'm surprised at the statement "Kelvin acted in many dramas and variety shows". Since when? A cameo appearence in 1 drama, "Dream Chasers", and 1 competition (if you can call it a variety show) "Project Superstar". I personally don't consider these many, so I have edited it away. --218.186.9.3 14:58, 15 December 2006 (UTC)Reply
Even I, an IP address, have bothered to write down a summary after editing. Why can't those with registered nicks do so? It seems pure vandalism when people just remove my hard-worked edits... or just to irritate me out. --218.186.9.3 05:20, 23 December 2006 (UTC)Reply


Major Achievements & Milestones

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This section is moved from article space.

This list of major achievemnts reads like a trivia section. (I think it should be more selective.) RJFJR (talk) 13:49, 17 July 2009 (UTC)Reply


Years Achievements
2005

1 September

  • First Project SuperStar Grand Champion

1 September

  • Kelvin Tan officially signed up under Play Music

24 September

  • First mini-concert in Malaysia

26 September

  • First Visually impaired celebrity to endorse commercials

30 September

  • Project Superstar Concert - Max Pavilion, Singapore

20 October

23 October

  • Top Fundraiser for Singapore Cancer Society Charity Show 2005

29 October

5 November

  • Performing artiste DAPE-Disability Awareness Public Education event, hosted by NCSS, Singapore

10 November

17 November

18 December

  • Highest joint Fundraiser (non-acrobatic segment) for Affairs of the Heart Charity

30 December

  • Featured Cover Artiste of I-weekly magazine, Singapore
2006

12 January

18 January

1 February

4 and 5 February

  • First autograph session in Singapore

19 February

  • First autograph session in Malaysia

2 March

29 March

22 April

  • First visually impaired singer in Asia to hold a solo-concert in Singapore (Weilian Debut Concert 2006)

20 June

  • 'Life Story' - short feature depicting Weilian's transformation from busker to superstar status.

10 July

  • Guest Appearance in Singapore drama Love 0 Degree C

16 July

  • Performing artiste for 'Starry Starry Night 2006' (“Singapore-China concert” series jointly produced by China's CCTV and Singapore's Mediacorp) at The Padang, Singapore

9 August

1 September

  • Renewed contract with Singapore's Mediacorp and Warner Music (Singapore)

3 September

  • Fundraiser for President's Star Charity

22 September

28 October

  • Nominee for the 6th Global Chinese Music Award (GCMA) - "Outstanding Regional Artiste (Singapore)"

11 November

10 December

  • First visually handicapped artiste to win "Most Popular Newcomer" and "Top 10 Male Artiste" in Star Awards 2006, Singapore [1]
2007

9 August

  • Supporting Cast in Singapore film '881'

31 August

  • Debuted in Taiwan with album "I-Weilian"

12 September

  • First Public Performance in Taiwan

7 October

9 October

  • Featured Cover Artiste of I-weekly magazine, Singapore

16 October

27 October

9 December

13 December

16 December

2008

23 March

  • Performing Artiste at SPOP Grand finals, with fellow label artiste, Chew Sin Huey, in Singapore Indoor Stadium

19 April

24 April

27 April

9 June

  • Nominated of 'Best Local Celeb Blog', online voting hosted by Singapore Omy.sg and was eventually positioned in 3rd place

28 June

13 July

  • Special appearance at 'Save The Earth' event organised by a local Chinese radio station, Capital 95.8, Singapore

7 September

6 October

2009

16 and 17 January

30 and 31 January

5 March

  • Nominated by Indonesia’s Chinese radio station, Radio Cakrawala 98.3 FM Mandarin Station, Wei Lian’s rendition of “Voices from The Heart” won the“Xing Feng Bang Nian Du Zui Jia Jin Qu” Award (Xing Feng Bang Annual Golden Song Award) end of last year

12 April

  • One of the eight judges for Campus Superstar 3 2009 and a performer of the night as well. He sang another composition of his, titled "Gu Dan Hao Ma"

12 July

  • Invited to perform in this year's National Day Parade (9 Aug 09), singing a medley of songs items (HeartLand theme) at the actual event. In view of this, on 2 July 09, he attended NDP Media Brief 3. Beside that, he also lends his voice to sing 'Jiu Zai Zhe Li' - Chinese Version (lyricist - Xiao Han) of the NDP09 theme song 'What Do You See' (composed and performed by the group Electrico)

14 July

  • Release of his 3rd album EPK(Electronic Press Kit) via official youtube channel

GA Review

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Reviewer: Seabuckthorn (talk · contribs) 16:23, 10 February 2014 (UTC)Reply
Nominator: J.L.W.S. The Special One (talk)

Hi! My review for this article will be here shortly.   --Seabuckthorn  16:23, 10 February 2014 (UTC)Reply


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I don't have access to references. I tried to access various sources through Google. For instance, for source 1, I googled Adeline Chia, "Singing his way home", The Straits Times and got till here but could not access it. I think the sources are not freely accessible. I cross-checked with other GAs I Not Stupid, Homerun (film), Denise Phua, Yip Pin Xiu, I Not Stupid Too, Murder of Huang Na, Money No Enough, Pathlight School, Fandi Ahmad, Movement for the Intellectually Disabled of Singapore, Ya Kun Kaya Toast, Xiaxue & Kelvin Tan. I could see that the sources cited in this article are used in other GAs as well.

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Hildanknight, I'm very happy and inspired by your choice of topics. I’m delighted to see your work here. As per the above checklist, there are no issues with the article and it’s a GA. All the very best for your future endeavors.  

Promoting the article to GA status.   --Seabuckthorn  10:51, 17 February 2014 (UTC)Reply

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GA concerns

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I am concerned that this article no longer meets the good article criteria. Some of my concerns are listed below:

  • There is a lot of uncited text.
  • There is not much information about his recent work. The music career stops at 2019, the personal life stops at 2020, and there are gaps in information of several years.

Is anyone interested in fixing up this article, or should it go to WP:GAR? Z1720 (talk) 12:22, 4 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

GA Reassessment

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


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Result: Delisted. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 21:21, 20 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

There is a lot of uncited text, and not much information about his recent work. The music career stops at 2019, the personal life stops at 2020, and there are gaps of several years of information. Z1720 (talk) 15:34, 13 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.