Talk:Kevin Lokko/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by SBFCEdit in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 18:37, 5 September 2021 (UTC)Reply


Comments

  • Merge first two paras.
  • Then instead of "Lokko began his... " -> "He began...
  • National League is overlinked.
  • "Cup winning" -> "Cup-winning". In both places.
  • "became captain at " link for captain?
  • "Eaton College" where?
  • "After being released by Norwich" reptitive.
  • "header" link.
  • "what would serve as " what was.
  • "injury-time" link.
  • "the National League on a season" overlinked.
  • "Man of the Match" link.
  • "with Stevenage chairman" their chairman.
  • Link substitute on the first instance (back in the Early career section).
  • Do we have a link for "loan"?
  • "clean sheets" link.
  • "the COVID-19 pandemic" go for the "in the United Kingdom" article here.
  • Link manager on its first instance.
  • "non-League" link.
  • "Described as" by whom?

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:41, 5 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for reviewing the article @The Rambling Man: I have made all of the above changes as you've suggested. Cheers. SBFCEdit (talk) 22:34, 5 September 2021 (UTC)Reply