Talk:Khosla Ka Ghosla/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 17:34, 14 July 2019 (UTC)

I will review this article. Thank you.  — Ssven2 ^{Looking at you, kid} 17:35, 14 July 2019 (UTC)

Ssven2 A reminder since it has been almost a month now. Yashthepunisher (talk) 04:45, 5 August 2019 (UTC)

I'll start posting comments tonight, Yash. Sorry I took up so much of time.  — Ssven2 ^{Looking at you, kid} 08:28, 5 August 2019 (UTC)

Comments

• Is it Khurana or Khurrana? Be consistent with the name right throughout the article. I think its the first but its your call.
• "Written by Jaideep Sahni, the film stars: Anupam Kher, Boman Irani Parvin Dabas, Vinay Pathak, Ranvir Shorey and Tara Sharma in the lead roles." — Remove the ":" and add a comma (",") after Boman Irani.
• "and seek the help of Meghna's mentor, Bapu, to act as the owner of the land looking for a buyer." — Do mention that Bapu's a drama theatre troupe manager and owner and then mention subsequently about the theatre and the troupe afterwards for clarity's sake.
• "growing up in middle-class Delhi" doesn't quite gel well with readers. Kinda vague. Maybe something like "growing up in a middle-class house in Delhi" or "growing up with a middle-class background in Delhi"?
• "Banerjee said a real life experience when he Sahni witnessed their father being insulted by someone powerful helped them to develop the character of the antagonist Khurrana." — Is it Banerjee's father or Sahni's father or both their fathers? Do clearly specify.
• "He also watched real footage captured using hidden camera's to understand how they behaved" — Isn't it "cameras" and not "camera's"?
• "Kher said that he tried to boost the team's morale as the film was "made while enduring a lot"." — Enduring what?
• Isn't it Meghna instead of Parvathy?
• "Banerjee was initially reluctant to give Parvin Dabas the role of Chironjilal but later decided to do so" — Its Chiraunjilal right? and also why did he choose to give the role to him eventually? Any reason for that?
• What other company did Hiremath have?

It's not mentioned in the source. Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:24, 6 August 2019 (UTC)

• "The film's small budget meant there were limited reels to shoot on two occasions." — You mean they "had limited reels" with them to shoot on two occasions right? Are those occasions mentioned by any chance?
• Wikilink the publishers, websites and newspapers' names on the first instance they are mentioned (or) whenever they are mentioned.

That's about it from me, Yashthepunisher. I don't see any major issues with the release and reception and post release sections. Resolve the above comments and the article is passed.  — Ssven2 ^{Looking at you, kid} 15:03, 5 August 2019 (UTC)

Ssven2 Your queries have been resolved. Thanks for reviewing the article. Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:24, 6 August 2019 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. Has an appropriate reference section:

   B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.

   Pass or Fail:

Thank you for addressing the above comments, Yashthepunisher. Congratulations, the article has passed.  — Ssven2 ^{Looking at you, kid} 12:25, 8 August 2019 (UTC)