Talk:Khraniteli/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 15:50, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

Thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:05, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 15:50, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

• Add alt text to both images.

• Done.

• Lead and #Context look good.

• Thanks.

• Plot is 444 words so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.

• Noted.

• "entertains them at table" - word missing?

• None that I can see. Maybe this is a British English thing.

Shouldn't it be "at a table"? Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 03:52, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

Fixed.

• Remove the comma after "in the snow to Bree".

• Done.

• Remove the comma after "bridge across a chasm".

• Done.

• Change "realise" to "realize" - AE and consistency.

• Done.

• What is the purpose of the #Crew section. Is this not covered in the infobox?

• Well, the infobox summarizes the key points of the article, several of which are in this section; the section covers also production design and costume design, not in the infobox.

Well, then I would suggest adding sources for the rest of the crew. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 03:52, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

Added.

• Archive sources for future use (you can use this tool or do it manually).

• Done.

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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