Talk:Killing Is My Business... and Business Is Good!/GA1
Latest comment: 10 years ago by Buffbills7701 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Buffbills7701 (talk · contribs) 14:25, 2 February 2014 (UTC)
Needing Citations
edit- "Instead, a majority of the budget was spent on drugs, alcohol, and food, forcing the band to fire their original producer and produce the record themselves."
- "...the cover artwork properly reproduced from a sketch given to them by Mustaine of a picture of Megadeth mascot Vic Rattlehead on the cover."
- Addressed these issues too. Haven't realized that the information was written in the liner notes at first place.--Вик Ретлхед (talk) 15:50, 2 February 2014 (UTC)
Other
edit- "However, this proved to not be enough and so the band were given a further $4,000." Shouldn't "were" become was?
- Technically, "were" could be correct, as in some contexts a band (or any group) can be treated as a collection of individuals rather than a single entity in and of itself. More common in British English though, I believe. Changed in any case.--L1A1 FAL (talk) 15:22, 2 February 2014 (UTC)
- The "Track listing" section has 2 different names for the first song: "Last Rites/Loved to Death" on the original version, and "Last Rites/Loved to Deth" on the 2002 reissue. A spelling mistake on one, or a different title between the 2 albums?
- Fixed. It's supposed to be spelled "Deth" as a reference to the band, but was either entered incorrectly, or "corrected" by a well-meaning editor.--L1A1 FAL (talk) 15:22, 2 February 2014 (UTC)
Verdict
edit- Great article, only small issues. I'm putting it on hold for a week. buffbills7701 14:25, 2 February 2014 (UTC)
- The article passes. buffbills7701 20:27, 2 February 2014 (UTC)