Talk:Killing of Osama bin Laden/GA1
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Mike Searson in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Mike Searson (talk · contribs) 18:28, 12 October 2011 (UTC)
- Overall it reads well and is properly sourced for the most part. There are a few "citations needed" or "dubious" tags, please address these by finding a reliable source for the statements or clarifying. There are 5 "blogs" used as sources, please find appropriate source material as blogs and forums are not considered reliable sources.--Mike - Μολὼν λαβέ 18:28, 12 October 2011 (UTC)
- It seems to solution to the "dubious" tag on the last paragraph of "Allegations against Pakistan" is just delete it without discussion. The entire paragraph is based on a blog by a self-described security expert. The only references just regurgitate the blog entry. At best this belong under OBL conspiracy theories. --MarsRover (talk) 07:04, 13 October 2011 (UTC)
- I tried to find sources to replace the blog references. I had to remove some quotes as they were only referenced by one source. -- Luke (Talk) 20:33, 13 October 2011 (UTC)
- Works for me. Great job, I noticed a bot had restored one blog as an orphaned ref, so I replaced it.--Mike - Μολὼν λαβέ 16:51, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
- I tried to find sources to replace the blog references. I had to remove some quotes as they were only referenced by one source. -- Luke (Talk) 20:33, 13 October 2011 (UTC)