Talk:Kim Holmes

Some proposed changes

Kim Holmes' current title is Executive Vice President of The Heritage Foundation. This should be added to the article. Here is the link to his profile page on Heritage.org- https://www.heritage.org/staff/kim-holmes. I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if another editor could make the edit for me to avoid any potential conflicts of interest. Augusta Cassada (talk) 19:33, 23 April 2018 (UTC)

Reply 23-APR-2018

 Implemented   SPINTENDO          20:56, 23 April 2018 (UTC)

Some proposed changes

I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if another editor could make the edit for me to avoid any potential conflicts of interest. I have lots of small edits to the entire page so I am copying the desired outcome below. Please let me know if there is a better way to implement these changes. Edits:

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Kim R. Holmes is an author and a former American diplomat and Assistant Secretary of State. As the current Executive Vice President of The Heritage Foundation, he speaks and writes on a variety of issues facing the United States. Between 1992 and 2012, he served twice as the foundation’s Vice President of Foreign and Defense Policy Studies and Director of its Kathryn and Shelby Cullom Davis Institute for International Studies.[1] From 2002 to 2005, he served as the United States Assistant Secretary of State for International Organization Affairs.[2] Holmes’s published works include The Closing of the Liberal Mind: How Groupthink and Intolerance Define the Left (2016), Rebound: Getting America Back to Great (2013) and Liberty's Best Hope: American Leadership in the 21st Century (2008). He is a founding editor of the annual Heritage/Wall Street Journal Index of Economic Freedom, in its 23rd edition in 2017. Under “CAREER”: Kim Holmes is a Distinguished Fellow at The Heritage Foundation, focusing on foreign policy and applying history to the formulation of U.S. public policy.[3] From 1992 to 2001 and from mid–2005 to 2012, Holmes had served as the foundation’s Vice President of Foreign and Defense Policy Studies. He helped expand the foundation’s engagement in national security policy and international affairs, by establishing, e.g., its Center for International Trade and Economics and its Margaret Thatcher Center for Freedom.[4] From 2001 to mid–2005, Holmes served as Assistant Secretary of State for International Organization Affairs under Secretary of State Colin Powell. His portfolio included U.S. engagement at the United Nations and 46 other international organizations, directing over 400 U.S. diplomats and civil servants at the State Department headquarters in Washington and at U.S. missions in New York, Geneva, Vienna, Paris, Rome, Montreal and Nairobi. Key efforts during that time included developing stronger mechanisms for countering terrorism and proliferation of weapons of mass destruction; combating human rights abuses such as genocide in Sudan; and reentering UNESCO. Major U.N. Security Council resolutions dealt with the U.N.'s involvement in Iraq and Sudan and the adoption of the first-ever nonproliferation resolution (United Nations Security Council Resolution 1540), which recognized the importance of global partnerships, such as the U.S.-led Proliferation Security Initiative. Holmes also helped to forge the first democracy caucus at the U.N. and to establish the United Nations Democracy Fund. He testified before Congress not only on the budget for engagement in international organizations but also on such hot topics as Castro’s crackdown on human rights activist in Cuba [5] and U.N. peacekeeping abuses in the Democratic Republic of the Congo. [6] Holmes first joined Heritage in 1985 as its defense policy analyst focusing on strategic defenses, the U.S. defense budget, military reform and weapons systems. He was promoted to as Senior Policy Analyst for National Security Affairs specializing in arms control, NATO, and East-West strategic relations, and subsequently to Director of Foreign and Defense Policy Studies before being named Vice President in 1992. Shortly after the September 11, 2001, terrorist attacks, Holmes spearheaded a task force of Heritage and outside experts to publish a groundbreaking homeland security report, "Defending the American Homeland."[7] The U.S. government, in the aftermath of 9/11, subsequently adopted many of its bipartisan recommendations. Holmes also launched the foundation’s homeland security program and expanded its missile defense program. In September 2000, he testified before Congress on national missile defense.[8] In 1995, he helped lay the intellectual groundwork for renewing the U.S. commitment to missile defense and ending self-imposed restrictions under the Anti-Ballistic Missile Treaty [9][10] with the Soviet Union. Prior to joining Heritage, Holmes had been a Senior Fellow at the Institute for Foreign Policy Analysis, a research institute associated with the Fletcher School of Law and Diplomacy, and a research fellow at the Institute for European History in Mainz, Germany, while completing his dissertation on the history of National Socialism in Bavaria between World War I and II.[11] He also taught European security and history as an Adjunct Professor at Georgetown University. Holmes is a member of the Council on Foreign Relations and a former member of its Washington Advisory Committee. He also is a member of the Board of Directors and Executive Committee of the Center for International Private Enterprise, which is associated with the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, the Philadelphia Society, the Mont Pelerin Society, the Institute for International Strategic Studies, and the Cosmos Club of Washington, D.C. He has served on the Defense Policy Board of experts who advise the Secretary of Defense, on the Executive Committee and Board of Directors of the Center for International Private Enterprise, and as a public member of the U.S. delegation to the Organization on Security and Cooperation in Europe. Holmes is a founding editor of the Heritage Foundation/Wall Street Journal's annual Index of Economic Freedom.[13] He served as its co-editor from 1995 through 2002 and from 2006 through 2014. The Index’s findings have been used by the World Bank [14] and the Organization for Economic Co-operation and Development [15]; by the U.S. government to determine country eligibility for Millennium Challenge Account funding; in textbooks in economics; by other indexes such as the Bertelsmann Stiftung Transformation Index and the Legatum Institute’s Prosperity Index;[16] and by several Federal Reserve Banks in their educational outreach programs. Business and risk management firms also use the Index to assess foreign investment climates.[17] Holmes has edited and co-edited such foreign policy publications such as: Restoring American Leadership: A U.S. Foreign and Defense Policy Blueprint; Mandate for Leadership, a guide for Washington policymakers; Between Diplomacy and Deterrence: Strategies for U.S. Relations with China; Reshaping Europe: Strategies for Post-Cold War Europe; and Strategic Defenses for the 1990s and Beyond. His most recent books include: The Closing of the Liberal Mind: How Groupthink and Intolerance Define the Left (2016), Liberty’s Best Hope (2008) and Rebound: Getting America Back to Great (2013). Holmes has published scholarly articles in such journals as Foreign Affairs, National Interest, Journal Aspenia (Italy), the African Executive, Harvard University's International Security, and Columbia University's Journal of International Affairs. His shorter foreign policy and current affairs pieces appear regularly on websites such as Foreign Policy and Public Discourse. Holmes served on presidential candidate Mitt Romney’s Foreign Policy and National Security Advisory Team in 2012.[18] His opinion pieces appear frequently in major newspapers and online journals. Holmes is married with two grown children and lives in Oakton, Virginia. Works[edit]: Studies and papers • Memo to a New President: How Best to Organize the National Security Council • The Great Divide: The Ideological Legacies of the American and French Revolutions • Smart Multilateralism and the United Nations • Twelve Principles to Guide U.S. Energy Policy • The U.S. and India: Partnership for the 21st Century (Lecture) • Spreading Freedom Around the World • North Korea Nuclear and Missile Issues: What's the Solution? • The Heritage Foundation Books • The Index of Economic Freedom • The NSDAP and the Crisis of Agrarian Conservatism in Lower Bavaria (1982, Garland Pub.) • Reshaping Europe: Strategies for a Post-Cold War Europe (1990) • SDI at the Turning Point: Readying Strategic Defenses for the 1990s and Beyond (1990) • A Safe and Prosperous America: A U.S. Foreign and Defense Policy Blueprint (1994) • The New Member’s Guide to the Issues • Defending America: A Near- and Long-Term Plan to Deploy Missile Defenses • Restoring American Leadership: A U.S. Foreign and Defense Policy Blueprint (1996) ISBN 978-0-89195-239-8 • Between Diplomacy and Deterrence: Strategies for U.S. Relations with China (1997) • Mandate for Leadership IV: Turning Ideas into Actions (1997) • Issues: The Candidate’s Briefing Book (1998,2000) • Priorities for the President (2001) • Reclaiming the Language of Freedom at the United Nations: A Guide for U.S. Policymakers (2005) • Liberty’s Best Hope: American Leadership in the 21st Century (2008) • Rebound: Getting America Back to Great (2013) • The Closing of the Liberal Mind: How Groupthink and Intolerance Define the Left (2016) Editorials • The Washington Times • The Daily Signal Additional Works[edit] Holmes’s numerous research papers, journal articles, testimony, op eds, and blogs are available online at www.heritage.org. Additional works include his writings, edited volumes, or contributions to the following: • Reshaping Europe: Strategies for a Post-Cold War Europe (Heritage Foundation, 1990) • SDI at the Turning Point: Readying Strategic Defenses for the 1990s and Beyond (Heritage Foundation, 1990) • A Safe and Prosperous America: A U.S. Foreign and Defense Policy Blueprint (Heritage Foundation, 1994) • Restoring American Leadership: A U.S. Foreign and Defense Policy Blueprint (Heritage Foundation, 1996) • Between Diplomacy and Deterrence: Strategies for U.S. Relations with China (Heritage Foundation, 1997) • Mandate for Leadership IV: Turning Ideas into Actions (Heritage Foundation, 1997) • Issues: The Candidate’s Briefing Book (Heritage Foundation, 1998, 2000) • Priorities for the President (Heritage Foundation, 2001) • Reclaiming the Language of Freedom at the United Nations: A Guide for U.S. Policymakers (Heritage Foundation, 2005) • ConUNdrum: The Limits of the United Nations and the Search for Alternatives (Rowman & Littlefield, 2009) • American Internationalism (U.S. Department of State, August 2003) • The Index of U.S. Military Strength (Heritage Foundation, 2015) • Reagan’s Legacy in a World Transformed (Harvard University Press, 2015) Book Review • Michael Warren, “Progressivism’s Macroaggressions: The goal of postmodern progressives isn’t universal truth, but power, which is presented in the guise of equality and social justice,” The Wall Street Journal, May 22, 2016. [CITATION ADDED, NEED NUMBER 20 HERE [1]] AND CHANGE 20 TO 21 IN NEXT ENTRY:: • David Aikman, "A Lesson for America: What Made Us Great Can Keep Us Great," Weekly Standard, Vol. 19, No. 34, May 19, 2014 [20] References 1. Jump up ^ “Kim R. Holmes,” biography, The Heritage Foundation 2. Jump up ^ “Kim Holmes," biography, U.S. Department of State 3. Jump up ^ "Heritage Gives Holmes New Portfolio, Promotes Carafano to Foreign Policy VP" 4. Jump up ^ http://www.heritage.org/about/staff/departments/margaret-thatcher-center-for-freedomdead url 5. Jump up ^ "Cuba and Its Brutal Crackdown on Democracy Activists" 6. Jump up ^ "Statement of the Honorable Kim R. Holmes, Assistant Secretary, Bureau of International Organization Affairs, U.S. Department of State, before the Subcommittee on Africa, Global Human Rights and International Operations of the Committee on International Relations, House of Representatives, March 1, 2005" 7. Jump up ^ http://uscrow.org/downloads/Guerrilla%20Warfare/Defending_the_American_Homeland.pdf dead url 8. Jump up ^ http://fas.org:8080/spp/starwars/congress/2000_h/holmes_sept_8.htm dead url 9. Jump up ^ http://oai.dtic.mil/oai/oai?verb=getRecord&metadataPrefix=html&identifier=ADA338693 dead url 10. Jump up ^ "Missile Defense Study Team B" 11. Jump up ^ "The NSDAP and the crisis of agrarian conservatism in lower Bavaria" 12. Jump up ^ http://www.washingtontimes.com/staff/kim-r-holmes/ 13. Jump up ^ http://www.heritage.org/index/pdf/2014/book/20thann.pdf 14. Jump up ^ http://econ.worldbank.org/external/default/main?theSitePK=478060&contentMDK=20699045&menuPK=713352&pagePK=64168182&piPK=64168060 15. Jump up ^ "Two Decades of Measuring Economic Freedom: A Look Back at the Index 16. Jump up ^ http://www.heritage.org/index/pdf/2014/book/20thann.pdf 17. Jump up ^ http://www.heritage.org/index/pdf/2014/book/20thann.pdf 18. Jump up ^ "Mitt Romney taps foreign policy, national security advisers" 19. Jump up ^ "Press Release: Emord & Associates Honors Leaders In Nutrition, Integrative Medicine, Medical Science, And Journalism At Spectacular Gala" 20. Jump up ^ http://www.wsj.com/articles/progressivisms-macroaggressions-1463950160 21. Jump up ^ http://www.weeklystandard.com/keyword/Rebounddead url External links[edit] • Official biography and all of his publications at Heritage Foundation • Official biography, U.S. Department of State • Articles, The Washington Times • Appearances on C-SPAN • The Closing of the Liberal Mind: How Groupthink and Intolerance Define the Left • Rebound: Getting America Back to Great • Liberty's Best Hope: American Leadership for the 21st Century 198.187.147.103 (talk) 18:56, 30 April 2018 (UTC) Some proposed changes part 2 I've implemented all changes except the references. If someone could implement those references listed, edits will be fulfilled. References[edit] 1. Jump up ^ “Kim R. Holmes,” biography, The Heritage Foundation 2. Jump up ^ “Kim Holmes," biography, U.S. Department of State 3. Jump up ^ "Heritage Gives Holmes New Portfolio, Promotes Carafano to Foreign Policy VP" 4. Jump up ^ http://www.heritage.org/about/staff/departments/margaret-thatcher-center-for-freedom 5. Jump up ^ "Cuba and Its Brutal Crackdown on Democracy Activists" 6. Jump up ^ "Statement of the Honorable Kim R. Holmes, Assistant Secretary, Bureau of International Organization Affairs, U.S. Department of State, before the Subcommittee on Africa, Global Human Rights and International Operations of the Committee on International Relations, House of Representatives, March 1, 2005" 7. Jump up ^ http://uscrow.org/downloads/Guerrilla%20Warfare/Defending_the_American_Homeland.pdf 8. Jump up ^ http://fas.org:8080/spp/starwars/congress/2000_h/holmes_sept_8.htm 9. Jump up ^ http://oai.dtic.mil/oai/oai?verb=getRecord&metadataPrefix=html&identifier=ADA338693 10. Jump up ^ "Missile Defense Study Team B" 11. Jump up ^ "The NSDAP and the crisis of agrarian conservatism in lower Bavaria" 12. Jump up ^ http://www.washingtontimes.com/staff/kim-r-holmes/ 13. Jump up ^ http://www.heritage.org/index/pdf/2014/book/20thann.pdf 14. Jump up ^ http://econ.worldbank.org/external/default/main?theSitePK=478060&contentMDK=20699045&menuPK=713352&pagePK=64168182&piPK=64168060 15. Jump up ^ "Two Decades of Measuring Economic Freedom: A Look Back at the Index" 16. Jump up ^ http://www.heritage.org/index/pdf/2014/book/20thann.pdf 17. Jump up ^ http://www.heritage.org/index/pdf/2014/book/20thann.pdf 18. Jump up ^ "Mitt Romney taps foreign policy, national security advisers" 19. Jump up ^ "Press Release: Emord & Associates Honors Leaders In Nutrition, Integrative Medicine, Medical Science, And Journalism At Spectacular Gala" 20. Jump up ^ http://www.wsj.com/articles/progressivisms-macroaggressions-1463950160 21. Jump up ^ http://www.weeklystandard.com/keyword/Rebound

Augusta Cassada (talk) 19:23, 30 April 2018 (UTC)

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I have reverted the changes you made to the article. Wikipedia practice is for you to make the requests here on the talk page, and for an uninvolved editor to review your request and make the changes. I will review your request above and return with a reply asap. Thank you!   SPINTENDO          23:04, 30 April 2018 (UTC)

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Kim R. Holmes is an author and a former American diplomat and Assistant Secretary of State. As the current Executive Vice President of The Heritage Foundation, he speaks and writes on a variety of issues facing the United States. Between 1992 and 2012, he served twice as the foundation’s Vice President of Foreign and Defense Policy Studies and Director of its Kathryn and Shelby Cullom Davis Institute for International Studies.[1] From 2002 to 2005, he served as the United States Assistant Secretary of State for International Organization Affairs.[2]  Partly approved. ___________ Holmes’s published works include The Closing of the Liberal Mind: How Groupthink and Intolerance Define the Left (2016), Rebound: Getting America Back to Great (2013) and Liberty's Best Hope: American Leadership in the 21st Century (2008). He is a founding editor of the annual Heritage/Wall Street Journal Index of Economic Freedom, in its 23rd edition in 2017.  Partly approved. ___________ Under “CAREER”: Kim Holmes is a Distinguished Fellow at The Heritage Foundation, focusing on foreign policy and applying history to the formulation of U.S. public policy.[3] From 1992 to 2001 and from mid–2005 to 2012, Holmes had served as the foundation’s Vice President of Foreign and Defense Policy Studies.  Approved. ___________ He helped expand the foundation’s engagement in national security policy and international affairs, by establishing, e.g., its Center for International Trade and Economics and its Margaret Thatcher Center for Freedom.[4]  Unable to implement. ___________ From 2001 to mid–2005, Holmes served as Assistant Secretary of State for International Organization Affairs under Secretary of State Colin Powell. His portfolio included U.S. engagement at the United Nations and 46 other international organizations, directing over 400 U.S. diplomats and civil servants at the State Department headquarters in Washington and at U.S. missions in New York, Geneva, Vienna, Paris, Rome, Montreal and Nairobi.  Partly approved. ___________ Key efforts during that time included developing stronger mechanisms for countering terrorism and proliferation of weapons of mass destruction; combating human rights abuses such as genocide in Sudan; and reentering UNESCO. Major U.N. Security Council resolutions dealt with the U.N.'s involvement in Iraq and Sudan and the adoption of the first-ever nonproliferation resolution (United Nations Security Council Resolution 1540), which recognized the importance of global partnerships, such as the U.S.-led Proliferation Security Initiative. Holmes also helped to forge the first democracy caucus at the U.N. and to establish the United Nations Democracy Fund.  Unable to implement. ___________ He testified before Congress not only on the budget for engagement in international organizations but also on such hot topics as Castro’s crackdown on human rights activist in Cuba [5] and U.N. peacekeeping abuses in the Democratic Republic of the Congo. [6]  Approved. ___________ Holmes first joined Heritage in 1985 as its defense policy analyst focusing on strategic defenses, the U.S. defense budget, military reform and weapons systems. He was promoted to as Senior Policy Analyst for National Security Affairs specializing in arms control, NATO, and East-West strategic relations, and subsequently to Director of Foreign and Defense Policy Studies before being named Vice President in 1992.  Approved. ___________ Shortly after the September 11, 2001, terrorist attacks, Holmes spearheaded a task force of Heritage and outside experts to publish a groundbreaking homeland security report, "Defending the American Homeland."[7] The U.S. government, in the aftermath of 9/11, subsequently adopted many of its bipartisan recommendations. Holmes also launched the foundation’s homeland security program and expanded its missile defense program. In September 2000, he testified before Congress on national missile defense.[8].  Unable to implement. ___________ In 1995, he helped lay the intellectual groundwork for renewing the U.S. commitment to missile defense and ending self-imposed restrictions under the Anti-Ballistic Missile Treaty [9][10] with the Soviet Union.  Approved. ___________ Prior to joining Heritage, Holmes had been a Senior Fellow at the Institute for Foreign Policy Analysis, a research institute associated with the Fletcher School of Law and Diplomacy, and a research fellow at the Institute for European History in Mainz, Germany, while completing his dissertation on the history of National Socialism in Bavaria between World War I and II.[11] He also taught European security and history as an Adjunct Professor at Georgetown University.  Partly approved. ___________ Holmes is a member of the Council on Foreign Relations and a former member of its Washington Advisory Committee. He also is a member of the Board of Directors and Executive Committee of the Center for International Private Enterprise, which is associated with the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, the Philadelphia Society, the Mont Pelerin Society, the Institute for International Strategic Studies, and the Cosmos Club of Washington, D.C. He has served on the Defense Policy Board of experts who advise the Secretary of Defense, on the Executive Committee and Board of Directors of the Center for International Private Enterprise, and as a public member of the U.S. delegation to the Organization on Security and Cooperation in Europe.  Unable to implement. ___________ Holmes is a founding editor of the Heritage Foundation/Wall Street Journal's annual Index of Economic Freedom.[13] He served as its co-editor from 1995 through 2002 and from 2006 through 2014.  Approved. ___________ The Index’s findings have been used by the World Bank [14] and the Organization for Economic Co-operation and Development [15]; by the U.S. government to determine country eligibility for Millennium Challenge Account funding; in textbooks in economics; by other indexes such as the Bertelsmann Stiftung Transformation Index and the Legatum Institute’s Prosperity Index;[16] and by several Federal Reserve Banks in their educational outreach programs. Business and risk management firms also use the Index to assess foreign investment climates.[17]  Not approved. ___________ Holmes has edited and co-edited such foreign policy publications such as: Restoring American Leadership: A U.S. Foreign and Defense Policy Blueprint; Mandate for Leadership, a guide for Washington policymakers; Between Diplomacy and Deterrence: Strategies for U.S. Relations with China; Reshaping Europe: Strategies for Post-Cold War Europe; and Strategic Defenses for the 1990s and Beyond. His most recent books include: The Closing of the Liberal Mind: How Groupthink and Intolerance Define the Left (2016), Liberty’s Best Hope (2008) and Rebound: Getting America Back to Great (2013). Holmes has published scholarly articles in such journals as Foreign Affairs, National Interest, Journal Aspenia (Italy), the African Executive, Harvard University's International Security, and Columbia University's Journal of International Affairs. His shorter foreign policy and current affairs pieces appear regularly on websites such as Foreign Policy and Public Discourse. Holmes served on presidential candidate Mitt Romney’s Foreign Policy and National Security Advisory Team in 2012.[18] His opinion pieces appear frequently in major newspapers and online journals. Holmes is married with two grown children and lives in Oakton, Virginia.  Already done. ___________

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Thank you for your quick work and help since I have a conflict of interest. The office of Kim Holmes would like to have the page updated in a way that removes the need for a maintenance template. Any edits or guidance you can provide is much appreciated. In response to your reviewer decisions and feedback, thank you for your work. All edits are fine as you have them. Those that do not have enough references to back them up are ok to be removed. Thank you! Augusta Cassada (talk) 14:45, 11 May 2018 (UTC)

Some proposed changes

Add his latest book, “The Closing of the Liberal Mind” (Encounter, April 2016) to the “Works” section. References: https://www.heritage.org/staff/kim-holmes and https://www.amazon.com/Closing-Liberal-Mind-Groupthink-Intolerance/dp/1594038511/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1452274667&sr=8-1&keywords=closing+of+the+liberal+mind I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if another editor could make the edit for me to avoid any potential conflicts of interest. Thank you! Augusta Cassada (talk) 15:06, 11 May 2018 (UTC)

Add his book "Rebound" references: https://www.amazon.com/Rebound-Getting-America-Back-Great/dp/1442223804 I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if another editor could make the edit for me to avoid any potential conflicts of interest. Thank you! Augusta Cassada (talk) 15:37, 11 May 2018 (UTC)

Reply 12-MAY-2018

 Done .spintendo⋅⋅) 07:02, 12 May 2018 (UTC)

Some proposed changes

In the first paragraph under "Career", make the last sentence that needs more citation, “Holmes first joined the Heritage Foundation in 1985 as its defence policy analyst.” Source: https://www.heritage.org/staff/kim-holmes I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if someone could make the edit for me since I have a conflict of interest. Thank you! Augusta Cassada (talk) 14:23, 30 May 2018 (UTC)

Under "Career" where more citation is needed, add Kim Homes' Heritage bio as a reference: https://www.heritage.org/staff/kim-holmes Thank you! Augusta Cassada (talk) 20:11, 15 May 2018 (UTC)

Under "Career" please add:
Member, Defense Policy Board, U.S. Department of Defense, 2001–2002. Source: https://www.heritage.org/staff/kim-holmes
Public member, U.S. Delegation to the Organization for Security and Cooperation in Europe, 1995. Source: https://www.heritage.org/staff/kim-holmes
Member, Board of Directors and Executive Committee, The Center for International Private Enterprise, associated with the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, 2016 to Present; formerly board member, 1997–2002. Source: https://www.cipe.org/who-we-are/board/

I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if someone could make these changes for me since I have a conflict of interest. Thank you! Augusta Cassada (talk) 21:06, 29 May 2018 (UTC)

Under "Works", please add that he has a chapter in “Ronald Reagan’s Approach to the United Nations,” in Reagan’s Legacy in a World Transformed, Harvard University Press, April 6, 2015. Source: http://www.hup.harvard.edu/catalog.php?isbn=9780674967694 I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if another editor could make the edit for me to avoid any potential conflicts of interest. Thank you! Augusta Cassada (talk) 14:25, 30 May 2018 (UTC)

Under the "Career" section where it is established that he is an author, add "He is the author of three books" Books and sources:http://www.worldcat.org/title/rebound-getting-america-back-to-great/oclc/915460079, http://www.worldcat.org/title/closing-of-the-liberal-mind-how-groupthink-and-intolerance-define-the-left/oclc/973807452, http://www.worldcat.org/title/libertys-best-hope-american-leadership-for-the-21st-century/oclc/300014218 I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if another editor could make the edit for me to avoid any potential conflicts of interest. Thank you! Augusta Cassada (talk) 14:31, 30 May 2018 (UTC)

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In the first paragraph under "Career", make the last sentence that needs more citation, Holmes first joined the Heritage Foundation in 1985 as its defence policy analyst.  Not approved. ___________ Under "Career" where more citation is needed, add Kim Homes' Heritage bio as a reference.  Not approved. ___________ Under "Career" please add: Member, Defense Policy Board, U.S. Department of Defense, 2001–2002. ? References needed. ___________ Public member, U.S. Delegation to the Organization for Security and Cooperation in Europe, 1995. ? References needed. ___________ Member, Board of Directors and Executive Committee, The Center for International Private Enterprise, associated with the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, 2016 to Present; formerly board member, 1997–2002. ? References needed. ___________ Under "Works", please add that he has a chapter in “Ronald Reagan’s Approach to the United Nations,” in Reagan’s Legacy in a World Transformed, Harvard University Press, April 6, 2015. ? Page numbers needed. ___________ Under the "Career" section where it is established that he is an author, add "He is the author of three books"  Unable to implement. ___________

Some proposed changes

In response to your reviewer decisions and feedback, thank you for your work. All edits are fine as you have them. Those that do not have enough references to back them up are ok to be removed and disregarded. The office of Kim Holmes would like to have the page updated in a way that removes the need for a maintenance template. Any edits or guidance you can provide is much appreciated. Thank you! I appreciate any help as I have a conflict of interest. Augusta Cassada (talk) 20:12, 12 June 2018 (UTC)

Reply 12-JUN-2018

It looks like the information that needs to be referenced would be the following:

Prior to joining Heritage in 1985, Holmes was a Senior Fellow at the Institute for Foreign Policy Analysis, a research institute associated with the Fletcher School of Law and Diplomacy, and was a research fellow at the Institute for European History in Mainz, Germany. Holmes first joined the Heritage Foundation in 1985 as its defense policy analyst focusing on strategic defenses, the U.S. defense budget, military reform and weapons systems. While at Heritage, he was promoted to senior policy analyst for national security affairs specializing in arms control, NATO, and East-West strategic relations. He was subsequently promoted to director — and in 1992, vice president — of foreign and defense policy studies. He served in that position until 2001, and again from 2005 to 2012.

I know you said that "those that do not have enough references to back them up are ok to be removed and disregarded" but because those sentences constitute a significant part of the article, I'd rather get an ok from you on each of them before removing them wholesale. Many editors at Wikipedia feel that when information cannot be verified but the information still remains basic uncontroversial facts which are verifiable it is best to leave the information rather than remove it. I believe that to be the case here. Please indicate whether any of the information above can be verified elsewhere or if you'd like it removed. Thank you  spintendo  04:31, 13 June 2018 (UTC)

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Some proposed changes

Under "Career," the date "1985" in the first paragraph should be changed to "1986." Remove "focusing on strategic defenses, the U.S. defense budget, military reform and weapons systems" in the second sentence because it cannot be verified. Proposed changes to implement:

Prior to joining Heritage in 1986, Holmes was a Senior Fellow at the Institute for Foreign Policy Analysis, a research institute associated with the Fletcher School of Law and Diplomacy, and was a research fellow at the Institute for European History in Mainz, Germany. Holmes first joined the Heritage Foundation in 1986[a]. While at Heritage, he was promoted to senior policy analyst for national security affairs specializing in arms control, NATO, and East-West strategic relations. He was subsequently promoted to director — and in 1992, vice president — of foreign and defense policy studies. He served in that position until 2001, and again from 2005 to 2012.

[a]source= https://www.heritage.org/staff/kim-holmes

I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if another editor could make the edit for me to avoid any potential conflicts of interest. Thank you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by AugustaCassida (talk • contribs) 18:21, 18 June 2018 (UTC)

Reply 19-JUN-2018

 Approved. Please note the following:

1. The information presented at the very beginning of the Career section was updated by changing the year that the subject joined the Heritage Foundation (HF) from 1985 to 1986. This was given a citation to the subject's Bio page at HF.
2. The previously existing Citation needed inline template, which had been placed near the occurrence of the now-corrected date of 1985, has been removed, as the date was cited to the Bio page.
3. Despite removal of this Citation needed inline template, the information surrounding the corrected date — including information mentioned about the subject before he joined HF — remains without references.
4. The article's continuing need for additional citations has not been "corrected" by the removal of the Citation needed inline template; rather, it is merely better addressed by the already existing BLP sources maintenance template, which remains in place.

Regards,  spintendo  10:06, 19 June 2018 (UTC)

Some proposed changes

1. In response to note 6 (The claim that the subject "has a chapter" does not specify whether that chapter was written by the subject. If the chapter was written by the subject, then the claim would be placed within the Works section. Please indicate the page numbers of the publication in question in order for this information to be added.) Please add: Under "Works", please add that he has a chapter in “Ronald Reagan’s Approach to the United Nations,” in Reagan’s Legacy in a World Transformed, Harvard University Press, April 6, 2015. Source: http://www.hup.harvard.edu/catalog.php?isbn=9780674967694 He has a chapter in this volume. I guess it would look like this- "Chidester, Jeffrey L; Kengor, Paul (2015). Reagan’s Legacy in a World Transformed. Harvard University Press."
2. In response to Note 5 (As this claim involves working at a separate location which is different from the Heritage Foundation, the references for this part of the proposed text ought to originate from those locations — in this case, the Center for International Private Enterprise or the US Chamber of Commerce.) Please add: "Member, Board of Directors and Executive Committee, The Center for International Private Enterprise, associated with the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, 2016 to Present; formerly board member, 1997–2002." Citation available here: https://www.cipe.org/who-we-are/people/kim-holmes/ I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if another editor could make the edit for me to avoid any potential conflicts of interest.
3. In response to Note 7 (In the Career section, it is not "established that he is an author". Furthermore, the section just below the Career section which is labeled Works indicates that the subject has authored works, and lists them for reference. Thus, the mentioning of the subject as being an author just before the works which he has authored are listed may appear as superfluous.) Please disregard request add: Under the "Career" section where it is established that he is an author, add "He is the author of three books". As it is redundant. I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if another editor could make the edit for me to avoid any potential conflicts of interest.
4. In response to Note 4 (As this claim involves working at a separate location which is different from the Heritage Foundation, the references for this part of the proposed text ought to originate from those locations — in this case, the US State Department or the Organization for Security and Cooperation in Europe.) Please disregard request add: Public member, U.S. Delegation to the Organization for Security and Cooperation in Europe, 1995. As we can not find an independent on-line citation. I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if another editor could make the edit for me to avoid any potential conflicts of interest.
5. In response to Note 3 (As this claim involves working at a separate location which is different from the Heritage Foundation, the references for this part of the proposed text ought to originate from those locations — in this case, the US Department of Defense.) Please remove the request: Under "Career" please add: Member, Defense Policy Board, U.S. Department of Defense, 2001–2002. As we can not find an independent on-line citation. I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if another editor could make the edit for me to avoid any potential conflicts of interest.

Augusta Cassada (talk) 15:39, 27 June 2018 (UTC)

Reply 27-JUN-2018

1. "Please add.." This was added to the Works list as a separate book chapter.  Done
2. "Please add.." This claim was added to the Career section.  Done
3. "Please disregard request add"  Done
4. "Please disregard request add"  Done
5. "Please remove the request"  Done

Please note: I can add the last two items from your list (#4 and #5 above) to the article, but with a citation needed inline template which should cover both claims. Let me know if this is an acceptable alternative. Thank you!  spintendo  18:31, 27 June 2018 (UTC)

Some proposed changes

This is an inquiry in how to remove the maintenance banner. I've been working to implement updates and edits for a few months now and it still remains. Please let me know if there is anything else specific we can add or remove to have that banner taken down. I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if another editor could make the edit for me to avoid any potential conflicts of interest. Any help is appreciated. Thank you! Augusta Cassada (talk) 20:16, 27 July 2018 (UTC)

Reply 28-JUL-2018

 Deferred to the template's assigning editor

The template in question was assigned 8 years ago by 78.26. That editor, who is now an active administrator, should be consulted first as a courtesy in order to determine whether or not they feel the template may be removed. Regards,  spintendo  11:11, 28 July 2018 (UTC)

That is very thoughtful, but obviously a number of sources have been added to the article since I added that template. Any editor should be able to remove it, preferably with a note that the article contains several citations. When I added that template, there were zero citations. Thanks to all who have contributed! 78.26 _{(spin me / revolutions)} 03:49, 29 July 2018 (UTC)

Some proposed changes

Under "Career" It should be that he has been at Heritage since 1985, not 1986. There was some question as to which date was correct- but 1985 is when he started working at The Heritage Foundation. Source: https://www.heritage.org/staff/kim-holmes I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if another editor could make the edit for me to avoid any potential conflicts of interest. Thank you! 2600:6C5A:6F80:68:0:EA3B:1EB8:AC00 (talk) 21:18, 25 September 2018 (UTC)

Reply 25-SEP-2018

  Edit request approved  (provisional)  

• I will make this change, as it is a minor detail, but I would first ask that the COI editor make their request under their already-disclosed, permanent account rather than an anonymous IP. Using an IP makes the required attribution of the request to a properly COI-disclosed account within the edit summary difficult.  Spintendo  23:39, 25 September 2018 (UTC)

Edit request 16-OCT-2018, 28-NOV-2018, 13-DEC-2018

Following up on this request as stated below. I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if another editor could make the edit for me to avoid any potential conflicts of interest. Thank you. Augusta Cassada (talk) 17:01, 13 December 2018 (UTC)

Under "Career" It should be that he has been at Heritage since 1985, not 1986. There was some question as to which date was correct- but 1985 is when he started working at The Heritage Foundation. Source: https://www.heritage.org/staff/kim-holmes I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if another editor could make the edit for me to avoid any potential conflicts of interest. Thank you! Augusta Cassada Augusta Cassada (talk) 17:53, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

I apologize, didn't realize I wasn't logged in. Here is my request again: Under "Career" It should be that he has been at Heritage since 1985, not 1986. There was some question as to which date was correct- but 1985 is when he started working at The Heritage Foundation. Source: https://www.heritage.org/staff/kim-holmes I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if another editor could make the edit for me to avoid any potential conflicts of interest. Thank you! Augusta Cassada (talk) 18:40, 16 October 2018 (UTC)

Reply 13-DEC-2018

  Edit request implemented    Spintendo  22:01, 13 December 2018 (UTC)

Some proposed changes

In the second sentence of the first paragraph under "Career," it should say that Holmes first joined the Heritage Foundation in 1985, not 1986. This matches the first sentence. Source: https://www.heritage.org/staff/kim-holmes I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if another editor could make the edit for me to avoid any potential conflicts of interest. Thank you! Augusta Cassada (talk) 18:43, 1 February 2019 (UTC)

I've implemented this change. Chetsford (talk) 19:08, 1 February 2019 (UTC)

Request edit

Under Career in the 3rd paragraph, it says, ”In 2001, Holmes served as Assistant Secretary of State for International Organization Affairs under Secretary of State Colin Powell…” That should be “In 2002, Holmes served……” to match the references. I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if another editor could make the edit for me to avoid any potential conflicts of interest. Augusta Cassada (talk) 21:04, 12 August 2019 (UTC)

There is a discrepancy in the State bio “in office” date, and the dates in the box on right side. Shouldn’t these match? (11/21 vs. 11/19/2002; 5/6 vs. 5/1/2005) I would think if an adjustment needs to be made, it is the box that should be corrected, as the State info is the direct source. I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if another editor could make the edit for me to avoid any potential conflicts of interest. Augusta Cassada (talk) 21:06, 12 August 2019 (UTC)

Please add to the career section: On August 1, 2019 Dr. Holmes was confirmed by the Senate to be a member of the National Council on the Humanities. Source: https://www.neh.gov/news/sixteen-new-members-appointed-national-council-humanities I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if another editor could make the edit for me to avoid any potential conflicts of interest. Augusta Cassada (talk) 21:07, 12 August 2019 (UTC)

Partially implemented The date of 2001 was changed to 2002 and the claim regarding the confirmation was added. The request to fix the State bio in office date is not actionable, since there is no discrepancy. Regards,  Spintendo  21:39, 12 August 2019 (UTC)

Some Proposed Changes

Kim Holmes' last day at The Heritage Foundation was Friday, April 16, 2021. He should now be listed as the "Former Executive Vice President of the Heritage Foundation." Source: https://www.heritage.org/staff/kim-holmes. I work at The Heritage Foundation and would appreciate if another editor could make the edit for me to avoid any potential conflicts of interest. Thank you! Augusta Cassada (talk) 18:30, 20 April 2021 (UTC)

 DoneFerkjl (talk) 19:40, 22 April 2021 (UTC)