Talk:Kim Wan-sun

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Letmejustcorrectthatforyou in topic Wording

Plagiarism

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Either this article plagiarises the article by "The Korean" cited as the fifth footnote as of 9 October 2016, or "The Korean" plagiarises this article, and I know which way I'd bet.

The Korean's article

That article's record at archive.org.

Joe Bernstein <joe@sfbooks.com> 173.250.246.231 (talk) 23:59, 9 October 2016 (UTC)Reply

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Genre

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She did music like dance-pop, synthpop, disco. So i changed the genre. LSM1204 (talk) 16:45, 14 July 2017 (UTC)Reply

Wording

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Quite a few sections of the article appears to be more story-telling than it is portraying fact biographically. Lines like "she was one of a kind but now she was just like all the other idols" are clear red flags. Also, it is lacking sources for certain claims being made, such as her having a successful career in Hong Kong and Taiwan, and being the first korean pop artist to sell 1 million records. Letmejustcorrectthatforyou (talk) 10:38, 19 March 2019 (UTC)Reply