Talk:King Arthur & the Knights of Justice (video game)

GA review

This article is good, but there are some concerns that need to be addressed:

• May 1995 – Redundant linking
• which was itself loosely inspired by Arthurian legends – "itself" is unnecessary here.
• A few redundant links throughout. Example: American, dragon, antidote etc.
• and was inspired by The Legend of Zelda series as well as various written works – Change "as well as" to "and"
• accompagnied -> accompanied
• sword of Excalibur -> Excalibur sword
• The party finds the seventh and eighth Keys of Truth in Crownhorn village and the Cape of Death, respectively. – The party find…
• Arthur travels to the Town of the Dead alone then to the Plain of the Dead and retrieves his two dead Knights. - Arthur travels to the Town of the Dead by himself, then to the Plain of the Dead and retrieves his two dead Knights.
• They reach Morgana's castle, called Stone Gardens, and defeat Morgana's dragon form, thus obtaining the last Key of Truth. – "Called" is unnecessary.
• King Arthur & the Knights of Justice was the first Enix video game developed by an American company. – Cut out "video". It flows better that way.
• while the website Allgame rated it 3 stars out of 5. – It should be 3 out of 5 stars.
• Electronic Gaming Monthly felt that the graphics lack vibrant colors but that the music was "alright". – I’d cut out the first "that". Also, shouldn’t there be a comma before but?
• A key problem highlighted was the game's lack of indication concerning which Knights to bring to defeat which bosses, as only one is suited for each. – I didn't quite understand this sentence, and it seemed a bit awkward. Can you please rephrase it a little?
• The game seemed "unfinished and underdeveloped" for the Video Game Bible[16] as well as Milligan – comma after Video Game Bible.
• The Video Game Bible gave the title a rarity score of 6 out of 10 on its scale, meaning the game may have had less than 20,000 copies produced. – Why does it mean that? Clarify.

Let me know when you've addressed my concerns. The Prince (talk) 22:04, 2 July 2008 (UTC)

I've fixed these issues. Antidote appears only once, I think it is reasonable to link it. I fixed the "key problem" stuff by adding a sentence in the Gameplay section so that the comment in Reception appears less cumbersome and hopefully clearer. Also I fixed a typo concerning the VG Bible (it's "more" not "less", sorry). Kariteh (talk) 14:22, 3 July 2008 (UTC)

I would just like to point out that "party" is a singular collective noun, and therefore the plural form of the verb should be used (i.e. finds, retrieves, etc.) The other way is incorrect grammar, so I am going to go ahead and fix that. Artichoker^[talk] 22:07, 4 July 2008 (UTC)

You are quite right. Thanks for pointing that out. Anyway, the article has passed. Great work on fixing the issues. The Prince (talk) 14:19, 8 July 2008 (UTC)

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