Talk:Kiribati at the 2016 Summer Olympics
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Courcelles in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 20:50, 1 July 2018 (UTC)
- May as well grab this one. Courcelles (talk) 20:50, 1 July 2018 (UTC)
- Were both Athletes competing in their first Olympics?
- Source "The 2016 Olympics were Kiribati's fourth Games." -Source participation in Beijing and London.
- Mention in the prose how Rukka performed in his heat and overall, rather than just the absolute time.
- "Kiribati has qualified one male weightlifter for the Rio Olympics by virtue of a top five national finish at the 2016 Oceania Championships." This is still in future tense...
- Include weightlifting results in the prose.
- This line from the Guardian piece "He now lives and trains at the Institute in Noumea, New Caledonia in the South Pacific." is important, the current prose makes it sound like he still trains on the beach without a gym. Indeed, you state the opposite, with a line like "He trained for the Olympics on the beach". The source says no such thing, just that he used to have to do so.
- If he was reigning Commonwealth champion, that seems worth mentioning.
- Some issues, but nothing unfixable in an hour's work. Courcelles (talk) 22:07, 1 July 2018 (UTC)
- Courcelles Addressed, let me know if the fixes caused any problems. Kees08 (Talk) 07:05, 2 July 2018 (UTC)
- Looks good, promoted. Courcelles (talk) 21:26, 2 July 2018 (UTC)
- Courcelles Addressed, let me know if the fixes caused any problems. Kees08 (Talk) 07:05, 2 July 2018 (UTC)