Talk:Klaxons/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)

• There are four deadlinks. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
• In reference 35, BBC News should not be linked. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
• The lead needs to be expanded to meet WP:LEAD. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
• "Musical style" needs additional verification and sources. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
• Actually, every section needs additional verification. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
• Reference 22 is a bare URL. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
• There is inconsistency with dating. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
• Inconsistency between NME and NME.com. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
• There should not be any one-sentence paragraphs. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
• File:Klaxons Queens May Ball 2007.jpg needs additional information. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
• Please see here, for some great fixes on your references. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
• The article really needs to go through a thorough copyediting. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)

Result

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• I am quick-failing this article because it meets the third decree on the quick-fail criteria. I think that if you copyedit the article, and fix all the reference problems, it would pass GAN if it were renominated. Sorry, CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)