Talk:Konstantin Mereschkowski/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by The Rambling Man in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:31, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
Another! Many thanks again. Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:50, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- "his Russian work" is Russian needed here?
- Cut.
- No reason for those two references in the lead, they can go into the main body if they're not already there.
- Moved.
- " a Privy Councillor" is there a reason this is capitalised?
- l/c.
- "famous scientists, publishing on anthropology" who was doing the **
publishing here, it's not clear.
- Edited.
- "to the paedophilia for" do you mean criminal acts of paedophilia?
- Edited.
- "classification of the diatoms based " overlinked.
- Fixed.
- "University, Tatarstan;" I would think that Tatarstan should go after the first mention of Kazan, not here.
- Done.
- " St. Petersburg" Saint Petersburg for consistency.
- Fixed.
- "strikingly" according to whom?
- Glossed.
- "to form chloroplasts.[14][12]" overlinked and ref order.
- Fixed.
- "sizeable lichen herbarium, containing" lichen overlinked.
- Fixed.
- "remains at Kazan University. It " overlinked.
- Fixed.
- "a mutualistic symbiosis between" overlinked.
- Fixed.
- "and indeed ridiculed" even rather than indeed.
- Fixed.
- JSTOR is in both italics and not italics in the refs.
- Fixed.
- Schimper is mentioned in the infobox but not in the article at all.
- Added mention.
- Likewise Wallin.
- Added.
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:54, 27 September 2021 (UTC)