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Reckless editing?
editLooking at recent edits to this article, it seems that much relevant information has been removed, questionable information left, and slightly irrelevant information added. Whilst detail in some areas was probably not necessary, surely it would've been better to remove that detail or split the article up with more headings or something, rather than remove large blocks of interesting and relevant information. Summary information was also removed, by the looks of it.
Additionally, what appeared to be a NPOV complaint was noted at the bottom of the page, and not in the correct format. There was no discussion started, but I applied a correct template anyway so that should someone actually decide to open discussion on the subject, they may. :)
I have to ask that any future major changes - and a possible overall improvement to the article - be discussed here.
Two new paragraphs, to replace removed info
editHere are my suggestions to replace some removed information. They're more concise.
- In the introduction: The school aims to achieve excellence in all aspects, and to keep a respectable pulic image.
- In the uniform section: A "three strikes" system applies for uniform enforcement. This has proven somewhat effective in improving compliance.
Additionally, I believe the following sections should be restored with minor editing for brievity:
- Buildings
- The college is situated on a single campus.... (perhaps to be combined with the buildings section, into the existing facilities section).
If there're no arguments to that in the next week or so, I'll go ahead and add those.
--Evan C 07:26, 2 March 2006 (UTC)
Removed Section
editWinter Uniform
editThe winter uniform may be worn year-round for boys, or during terms 2 and 3 for girls.
- White shirt
- Black socks (short for boys, knee-high for girls), or
- Black or navy blue tights/stockings, for girls
- Jumper (blue for years 7-10, maroon for VCE students)
- Blazer (blue; compulsory for new students from 2005, optional for others)
- Tie (blue with grey and red stripes)
- Grey trousers for boys, or
- Skirt for girls
Summer Uniform
editThe summer uniform applies only during Terms 1 and 4, with a two week overlap at the start of term. It is optional for boys (winter uniform may be worn), but compulsory for girls.
- Black school shoes are to be worn by all students.
Boys
editThe following is optional;
- Grey shorts (must be worn with white socks)
- Short-sleeve shirt
- White socks (must be worn with shorts, but not with long pants)
- Tie is optional
Girls
editThe following is compulsory;
- Gingham dress
- White knee-high socks
"T-Bar" shoes, for girls only (optional)
Summer Blazer Rules
editDuring summer terms, blazers must be worn until recess, at assemblies, on excursions, and when travelling to and from school, but are optional for the rest of the day. On days of excessive temperature, blazers are optional (if announced).
PE and Sport Uniform
edit- Light-blue Koonung polo top (maroon for VCE)
- Blue Koonung shorts, or
- Blue Koonung track pants
- Blue Koonung broad-brim hat (summer terms only)
- Appropriate, non-marking shoes
POV debate
editIs there still a POV debate going on? Why is the tag still there when noone commented on this page for more than a year now? Ubardak (talk) 02:14, 28 December 2007 (UTC)
Updates
editI updated some of the dates and fixed a few grammatical errors.
I also updated the most recent musical from "Urinetown" to "Fame".
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(sorry, I'm an editing newbie) Xewrch (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 01:17, 13 October 2009 (UTC).