Talk:Léon Gambetta-class cruiser
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 19:32, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
Criteria
edit1. Prose ✓ Pass
2. Verifiability ✓ Pass
3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass
4. Neutral ✓ Pass
5. Stable ✓ Pass
6. Illustrations ✓ Pass
7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass
Comments
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- "The Léon Gambetta-class cruisers" - I'd say it's probably okay to bold the entire word cruisers, it looks a little odd with just the ending s unbolded
- In the text, 12,550 metric tons is rounded to 12,350 long tons, while in the infobox, 12,352 long tons are given. Is there a way that the rounding can be made consistent?
- Done
- "She visited the United States in 1907 to" - Is this still the Victor Hugo?
- Yep, she's the last ship explicitly named.
- "She visited the United States in 1907 to participate in the Jamestown, Virginia, to participate in the Jamestown Exposition" - Grammar's a touch off here
- Oops.
- " in the Adriatic" - Wikilink the Adriatic, since it's the first mention in the main body of prose
- I only link once per article unless it's a really long article.
- " with heavy loss of life the following day" - Is this exact figure known? If so, it may be worth mentioning.
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- Deck armor is given as 33-65 mm in the infobox, there's no citation and I can't find the 33 mm figure in the text
- Three layers of 11 mm mild steel plates.
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- "You must also include a United States public domain tag to indicate why this work is in the public domain in the United States" - According to the file information for the blueprint plans "You must also include a United States public domain tag to indicate why this work is in the public domain in the United States", and such a tag is not present.
- Done.
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Placing on hold, this one doesn't need much work done.
- Thanks for the review and catching all these niggles.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:31, 25 April 2020 (UTC)
- Looks good, passing. Hog Farm (talk) 20:41, 25 April 2020 (UTC)