Talk:LLA Azteca Championship/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 15:19, 24 February 2019 (UTC)

Going to review this entry. MWright96 (talk) 15:19, 24 February 2019 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Infobox

• Use the plainlist template in the promotion field of the infobox so that CMLL and LLA appear in a unbulleted list

Lead

• "It was sponsored by TV Azteca Noreste, that televised all championship matches" - who
• "as it changed hands each time LLA/ CMLL promoted a title match." - LLA and CMLL
• "who was born in 1991 and won the title in September 2012 making him 19 or 20 years old at the time." - If Mistico was born in 1991, he would have been 20 or 21 when he won the title, correct?

Background

• "that are used in the storylines presented on their shows, they are not won as result" - the comma should be replaced by a semi-colom
• "but the outcome of the matches are pre-determined by their promoters." - better: but their outcome are pre-determined by promoters.
• "The championship is represented by a belt for the champion to wear" - incumbent holder
• "and by 2009 it was decided to create the "Azteca Championship" - and by 2009, had deided to create the "Azteca Championship",
• The entire second background is lacking reliable source(s)

History

• "The Azteca Championship was created in late 2009 with a one-night tournament" - as
• "with two six-man tag team matches to reduce the field from 12 to 6." - 12 to 6 wrestlers
• "The semi-final match was a torneo cibernetico elimination match" - event
• "with three wrestlers in the ring at the same time." - concurrently.
• "who was born in 1991 and won the title in September 2012 making him 19 or 20 years old at the time." - same issue as the third query in the lede
• "The last champions was Místico," - champion

Title history

• Monterrey, Nuevo León should be wikilinked the first time it is mentioned, not the sixth

Champion age at title win, youngest to oldest

• "Místico: 19–20 years" - same query as the third one in the lede and the fifth one in the history section

References

• References 3, 15 and 17 are lacking access dates

That is all of the queries I have. Going to put the review on hold. MWright96 (talk) 16:04, 24 February 2019 (UTC)

• MWright96 - thank you for the prompt review. I believe I have addressed all issues except sourcing the second paragraph in "background", I will do some research on that now. MPJ-DK (talk) 16:38, 24 February 2019 (UTC)
• MWright96 I looked around for where I found the unsourced "background" section and it does not appear to be a reliable source, so I rewrote it and added a source. I hope that works? and I believe I've addressed all the issues now?? MPJ-DK (talk) 00:00, 28 February 2019 (UTC)
  • @MPJ-DK: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 09:49, 28 February 2019 (UTC)