Talk:La Metálica/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:56, 17 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Will review this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 18:56, 17 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Lead

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  • Delink Mexican per MOS:OVERLINK
  • "She is the current, reigning Mexican National Women's Champion," - incumbent
  • "having won the championship in December 2018." - how about changing the text in bold title to avoid close repetition

Professional wrestling career

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  • "She made her in-ring debut on May 13, 2009, after having trained under Rocky Santana, Sadico, Judas el Traidor, Terrorista, Negro Navarro, Justiciero and Robin Maravilla prior to her debut." - try to reword the text in bold for the avoidance of repetition
  • "At some point prior to July 2014," - At an unknown date

CMLL (2016–current)

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  • "when not needed for CMLL shows." - when she was not needed
  • "all risk their masks in a Lucha de Apuestas, bet match." - don't think that the comma is needed here
  • "The 14-woman torneo cibernetico match where La Metálica was the second competitor eliminated." - saw La Metálica become the second wrestler eliminated.
  • "to become a double champion," - two-time
  • "She lost to Dalys in the finals two weeks later." - you mean Daly?
  • "Daly originally earned a CMLL World Women's Championship match against Marcela, but Marcela was injured." - try not to use Marcela's name too closely in the same sentence

References

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  • Reference 13 is missing the author
  • Reference 16 is dead and will need archiving

Am placing the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the above responses. MWright96 (talk) 19:57, 17 April 2020 (UTC)Reply