Talk:Lam Bun-Ching

Latest comment: 17 years ago by Espresso Addict in topic Review comments

Review comments

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Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

  • Appropriate infobox should be added
  • Photograph should be added from a source with a free license
  • Article needs expanding and should emphasise reasons for notability of subject
  • Article should be divided into appropriate subheadings
  • References should be added, preferably in the inline format
  • External link present which could be used to expand article

Espresso Addict 22:35, 12 July 2007 (UTC)Reply