Talk:Lane Murdock

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Helloworldasdsa in topic Relevancy

Relevancy

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This page does not seem to talk about Lane Murdock so much as it does the national school walkout -- perhaps it should be reorganized from a biography page to one about the walkout? Helloworldasdsa (talk) 06:57, 22 June 2019 (UTC)Reply

Biography Peer Review

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I would like my article to be peer reviewed. I would like thoughts on the article's tone - ensuring it's neutral. I'd also like reviews on the last two sections especially; Responses and Continuing Advocacy. Any sections that you think I could add more to? Also, have the images been correctly cited?

Thanks Verseaille (talk) 09:51, 18 October 2018 (UTC)Reply