Talk:Las Reinas del Pueblo/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Eurohunter (talk · contribs) 19:25, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

@AJona1992: I started review. Comments will be below. Review within 2023 GAN Backlog Drives. Eurohunter (talk) 19:25, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

Lead

1. "The recording peaked at number 147 on the American Billboard 200 chart and at number ten on the Spanish albums chart." - it's worth to add it was 15 years later. Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

•  Done – jona ✉ 16:48, 24 August 2023 (UTC)

Background

1. "Moreover, her album, Amor Prohibido, experienced a meteoric rise from the fourth to the first position on the Top Latin Albums chart." - I'm not sure if "meteoric" is an encyclopedic word. Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

•  Done – jona ✉ 16:48, 24 August 2023 (UTC)

1. "This phenomenon ignited a fervent acquisition of Latin music across international markets, including Japan, Germany, and China." - which China they mean? Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

• I removed this after it was found that the book spoke about regional Mexican music rather than Latin music as a whole. – jona ✉ 16:48, 24 August 2023 (UTC)

Music

1. "a commercially and critically acclaimed piece widely regarded as Selena's signature song and her "trademark", "Como la Flor" has become a posthumous epithet and swan song," - I think it's worth to change word "trademark". Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

• I removed it. – jona ✉ 16:48, 24 August 2023 (UTC)

Other

1. There is no introduction to previous and next compilation album of Selena and Graciela Beltrán. Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

• It's in the infobox. – jona ✉ 16:48, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
  • @AJona1992: Infobox is just a summary of text so all the information there should be included in text first. Eurohunter (talk) 18:07, 18 November 2023 (UTC)

1. Replace parameter "Work" or "Publisher" with "Website" in references. Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

•  Done – jona ✉ 16:48, 24 August 2023 (UTC)

1. Add links to archived versions in references. Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

• I believe all of them, that are archived, have links to the archived version. 16:48, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
  • @AJona1992: Only one reference ("Grammy-Winning Singer Selena Killed in Shooting at Texas Motel") has archived link added. Btw. there is error in reference "Dance Away Your 2020 Blues With Selena's Best Songs". Eurohunter (talk) 18:07, 18 November 2023 (UTC)

1. There is no link to Billboard etc. in references. Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

• Can you tell me which ones? The Billboard ones are linked. – jona ✉ 16:48, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
  • @AJona1992: First two and the others. Eurohunter (talk) 18:07, 18 November 2023 (UTC)

1. I did minor fixes. Eurohunter (talk) 20:44, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

• Thanks for that and your review! – jona ✉ 16:48, 24 August 2023 (UTC)

  @Eurohunter @AJona1992 this has been stalled for 2-1/2 months. Is there something preventing any additional progress? RoySmith (talk) 15:46, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

I did everything he had asked, just been waiting for a response, but I believe the article's GA nomination was updated for a second opinion, along with "Besitos". – jona ✉ 21:07, 7 November 2023 (UTC)