Talk:Lassie (1954 TV series)/GA1

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Xtzou in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Xtzou (Talk) 16:17, 18 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

Hi, I am reviewing this article and am impressed with how well written it is. And very interesting. My comments are the following:

  • Why isn't there anything on the actual dogs that played the role of Lassie. How many, where they came from, who trained them etc.
  • There are five fair use images. That is too many for an article. One, or perhaps even two can be justified, but no more than that.

Xtzou (Talk) 16:17, 18 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

  • The dog information is mostly included in the Lassie article, although in this article it's mostly in the three paragraphs of the casting section. Although I did realize that it was missing from the Characters and Cast section, so I added an additional listing there for dog actors as Lassie. Miyagawa (talk) 19:47, 18 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
  • Very good. It is a wonderful article. Just two very minor comments:
    Writers - nothing more to say about who they were other than McCarthyism?
    "Lassie portrait friendship ring based on the one Uncle Petrie fashions for Timmy" - on one of the Uncle Petrie fashions for Timmy?

Xtzou (Talk) 12:43, 19 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    B. MoS compliance:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  }
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail: