Talk:Launceston Castle/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 08:46, 12 December 2016 (UTC)

I will review this one over the next few days. Comments to follow. Zawed (talk) 08:46, 12 December 2016 (UTC)

Have started reviewing.

• ISBN for the Herring & Gillard ref?
• Deadlink for "launcestonthen.co.uk" ref, remaining weblinks check out OK
• No dupe links
• No DABs
• Image licences check out OK

More to follow. Zawed (talk) 04:24, 24 December 2016 (UTC)

• Herring and Gillard doesn't have one, unfortunately.
• Deadlink updated.

Thanks Zawed, Hchc2009 (talk) 08:08, 24 December 2016 (UTC)

Have gone through the text (apologies for the length of time it has taken to me to get to this), and made the odd change. Just a couple of things:

Lead

• "...packed within its bailey's walls." This wording doesn't seem to flow well to me. Perhaps rephrase to "packed within the walls of its bailey."

17th–18th centuries

• Philip Piper: is the spelling of the surname correct? I assume Hugh Pyper is a descendant?

Everything else looks great. Cheers. Zawed (talk) 03:05, 28 December 2016 (UTC)

@Hchc2009: just a ping in case you missed my follow up comments regarding the text. Cheers. Zawed (talk) 07:56, 3 January 2017 (UTC)

Oops, missed them! "packed" fixed as proposed. Philip Piper is as per the source; I think Pyper has to be a descendant, with the usual changes of spelling you get in this period, but the sources don't actually say this, and we'd be into OR unfortunately. Hchc2009 (talk) 08:06, 3 January 2017 (UTC)

OK, that's fine. The article looks good and I believe it meets all the GA criteria: it broadly covers the subject, is well written in a neutral tone and appropriately cited and illustrated. Passing as a GA now. Great work! Zawed (talk) 06:10, 4 January 2017 (UTC)