Talk:Laurence Edmondston

Review comments

Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

• Template:Infobox Scientist should be added
• Photograph/portrait etc should be added
• Article should be divided into appropriate subheadings
• Existing material needs reorganisation to reduce repetition
• Information on research should be expanded
• References should be expanded and converted to inline format
• External links to useful online resources should be added if available

Espresso Addict 16:58, 11 July 2007 (UTC)