Talk:Lazzi
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editHi Emily!
This has come a long way from where you picked it up! A few things I might suggest -- Maybe pare down your lead section to more of a summary, and add a section below to go into further detail with the great info you have there now; this might help the reader to gain a general overall view before diving into the article. Also, if you have an opportunity, you could consider adding an External Links or See Also section, where you could include journal articles or books for further reading (External Links section) or relevant wiki pages (See Also section). Lastly, you could add a short section on Lazzi in present-day theatre, if you have enough info to compile, and enough time to flush it out. That might be helpful if you have a chance. It's looking great! Jaynakatz (talk) 04:47, 22 November 2016 (UTC)
This article is good but it has some small style/format issues and leaves room for more information. The terms "preplanned" and "scene dragging" are repeated in the lead section, so maybe those statements can be combined to avoid redundancy. I suggest you add some information from our most recent reading on lazzi to fill out the article. For example, the disagreement on the term's origins and that list of popular lazzi (lazzo?). Is the influence of lazzi seen in any modern forms of comedy? Formatting-wise, if you don't plan on adding another subheading under "History," I would suggest changing the main heading or removing the subheading. Also, I think the term "bits" in the lead section is probably not a permitted use of quotations. There are two dead links to references in the first part of the history section that should probably be fixed. My last suggestion is that you move the image to the top because I think it would look better. Jackpmattern (talk) 20:20, 19 November 2016 (UTC)
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