Talk:Leleiohoku II/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Iazyges in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:15, 1 August 2018 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:15, 1 August 2018 (UTC)
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- No DAB links
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Prose Suggestions
editPlease note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.
- Some of his other classmates included Samuel Nowlein and Robert Hoapili Baker, both of whom were politicians in later life suggest:
- Some of his other classmates included Samuel Nowlein and Robert Hoapili Baker, who both became politicians later in their lives.
- American and British troops were landed with the permission of the Hawaiian government, and the rioters were arrested. may want to mention the source of these troops (presumably a nearby fort).
- @KAVEBEAR: That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:32, 23 August 2018 (UTC)
- As a side note, would you consider reviewing my FAC nom Tetricus I? Cheers. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:35, 23 August 2018 (UTC)