Talk:Lemon Zhang

Latest comment: 13 years ago by L.tak

Hello my dear friends I hope you can help me ferfect my article,i will be grateful. Nnu-1-05100108 (talk) 08:35, 24 September 2011 (UTC)Reply

He student, congratulations on your article. It is already in a good shape. In some places, where I didn't understand, I asked for a clarification (explanation), or a citation (reference). If you have done that, you can remove the request from the text. I also changed some things, to conform to the manual of style (WP:MOS), for example BIG is never used at the start of an article. For the last sentence I'd like to ask you to clarify. Was this in the movie or in real life? And does he have a wikipedia page we can link to? L.tak (talk) 09:42, 24 September 2011 (UTC)Reply