Talk:Leon W. Johnson/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Auntieruth55 (talk · contribs) 21:31, 2 March 2017 (UTC)

• I'll get to this over the weekend. auntieruth (talk) 21:31, 2 March 2017 (UTC)

First section

• second sentence is hinky

  Y Fixed after looking up "hinky" in the Wiktionary. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)

• link second lieutenant

   Done Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)

• Mitchell Field, New York, (missing comma after NY)

  Y Added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)

WWII

• Dab

  Y Disambiguated . Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)

• On 14 May 1943 comma

  Y Added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)

• The B-24, carrying incendiaries, came under particularly heavy attack from German fighters, as they were unable to stay close enough the B-17s to be protected by their gunfire, and had to open up their own formation to attack; five of the eight aircraft shot down were B-24s. confusing to an air fighting noob
• the attack on the Ploesti oil fields in Romania....the attack on the Romanian Ploesti oil fields is possibly more readable

   Done Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)

• Andy Rooney knew he was a general before he was a general?

  Yes, but he didn't like hanging around the bomber outfits, because it was too depressing. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)

Postwar

• capitalize air

   Done Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)

• promotion to major general?

   Done Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)

Nice! Let me know when you get to this. auntieruth (talk) 23:03, 10 March 2017 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   y

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   nicely done. interesting and concise. auntieruth (talk) 16:58, 11 March 2017 (UTC)