Talk:Leonard Gyllenhaal

Latest comment: 17 years ago by Espresso Addict in topic Review comments


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Hello, I find on biography of entomologists a different date of birth (3th december and not 13th), and a different first name (Leonhard and not Leonard). I have a doubt about name too. For Pamela Gilbert (1977 A compendium of the biographical literature on deceased entomologists. British Museum (Natural History) (Londres) : xiv + 455 p.), the correct name is Gyllenhal.

Thank for your help.--Valérie75 19:14, 25 September 2005 (UTC)Reply

I corrected the birth date from 13 to 3 December. The name is correct according to all Swedish secondary sources mentioned under references. Uppland 19:59, 25 September 2005 (UTC)Reply

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Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

  • Template:Infobox Scientist should be added
  • Portrait should be added if available
  • Needs some copy editing
  • Lead needs expanding and should emphasise reasons for notability of subject
  • Article should be divided into appropriate subheadings
  • Information on research should be expanded
  • References should be converted to inline format
  • External links to useful online resources should be added if available

Espresso Addict 01:27, 13 July 2007 (UTC)Reply