Talk:Leroy Hood

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Chaudeau in topic Review comments

Review comments

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Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

  • Template:Infobox Scientist should be added
  • Photograph should be added from a source with a free license
  • Needs copy edit to use Wikipedia style
  • Lead needs expanding and should include standard biographical details
  • Article should be divided into appropriate subheadings
  • Information on research should be expanded and references required
  • References should be added, preferably in the inline format
  • External links present which could be used to expand article

Espresso Addict 19:11, 13 July 2007 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for your comments. I agree that the article definitely need to be more synthetic and cite more sources. Chaudeau (talk) 21:18, 25 June 2014 (UTC).Reply