Talk:Let Me Know (Tamar Braxton song)/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Cartoon network freak in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 21:28, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
Lead
edit- and only included on the → and was only included on the record's
- Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
- Al Sherrod "A-Rod" Lambert, Tamar Braxton, → unlink Braxton here and only use her last name
- Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
- and Harmony Samuels → you may use "while" here for a better flow
- Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
- 1976 single "(At Your Best) You Are Love". → you may just put the year in brackets after the title here to avoid repeition
- Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
- complimented the visuals → there was only one music video, so please don't use the plural form
- Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
Infobox
edit- All on point here
- Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
Background and release
edit- and produced → you may use "while" for a better flow
- Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:40, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
- included of a rapper → remove the "of" as it doesn't make any sense
- Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:40, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
- Due to the experience, she chose to avoid making hip hop music → what do you mean here? Do you mean she chose to never release a hip hop song in her future career?
- Exactly. I have revised it to make it clearer. Aoba47 (talk) 21:40, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
Composition and lyrics
edit- 1976 single "(At Your Best) You Are Love" → same as in the lead
- Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:42, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
- She talks about love saying → She also talks about love, saying:
- Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:42, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
- Well-written paragraph!
- Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:42, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
Critical reception
edit- You should link "Music criticism" in "Critical reception" first
- Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:45, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
- Again, very well-written
- Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:45, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
Commercial performance
edit- number eight also on the same day → replace "also on the same day" with simultaneously
- Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:46, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
Music video and promotion
edit- directed the accompanying music video → directed the single's accompanying music video
- Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:48, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
- Throughout the video, Braxton → use "she" to avoid repetition
- Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:48, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
- seducing the listener → who is the listener?
- Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:48, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
Track listing
edit- Flawless ;)
- Thank you. Aoba47 (talk) 21:48, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
Credits and personnel
edit- Fixed by myself...
- Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
Charts
edit- Fixed by myself...
- Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
Release history
edit- Flawless ;)
- Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
Other stuff
editCopy-violation
edit- 30.1% is still acceptable!
- Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
Media
edit- Sample seems stable
- Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
References
edit- As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article
- Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:50, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
- No dead links! Good job!
- Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:50, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
Outcome
edit- Another well-written article from the Braxton series ! On hold for 7 days! Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:28, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
- @Cartoon network freak: Thank you for your review! I believe that I have responded to everything. Aoba47 (talk) 21:50, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
- Gladly passing this! Congrats; Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:52, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
- @Aoba47: Would you have time to take a look at "Hot"? Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:08, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
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