Talk:Let Your Head Go/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 17:48, 26 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section):

b. (citations to reliable sources):

c. (OR):

d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects):

b. (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Pipe electro to Electro (music) in the infobox
"also serving as additional producers." → "also serving as producers." to avoid the implication they contributed additional production role
"In 2004, it was included on the video album" → "In 2004, the former was included on the video album,"
"after her record company went" → "after Beckham's record company went"
"It is Beckham's" → "The song is Beckham's"
""Let Your Head Go" is a" → "It is a"
Pipe electro to Electro (music)
"by Beckham in the United Kingdom," → "by Beckham in the UK,"
Sophie Ellis Bextor → Sophie Ellis-Bextor with the wikilink

Where is the second solo album sourced?
A more accurate description than describing her solo career as a failure would be rapping career/style per the source

I'm not sure what you mean here Alex ^{reach me!} 22:32, 27 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

""Let Your Head Go" is a" → "Musically, "Let Your Head Go" is a" but the last genre is not sourced
Pipe electro to Electro (music)
Wikilink Racked per MOS:LINK2SECT
"and vintage Cyndi Lauper."" → "and vintage Cyndi Lauper"." per MOS:QUOTE
"just a few years prior."" → "just a few years prior"." per above
"feel, boasting "boasted a tune" → "feel and "boasted a tune"

Sophie Ellis Bextor → Sophie Ellis-Bextor on the img text with the wikilink
"received positive reviews from" → "was met with positive reviews from"
"Andy White, the song is" → "White, the song is" per his full name already having been used (The Independent is sufficient to identify which person of this surname he is)
"For Jon O'Brien of" → "For O'Brien of"
"Justin Myers from the Official Charts Company" → "Myers from the Official Charts Company"
Use the staff of introduction for Hollywood.com
"of her vocal proficiency."" → "of her vocal proficiency"." per MOS:QUOTE
"In the United Kingdom," → "In the UK,"
"with Sophie Ellis Bextor's" → "with Sophie Ellis-Bextor's" with the wikilink
Pipe Eurochart Hot 100 Singles to European Hot 100 Singles

Pipe wire hanger to Clothes hanger
"She wakes from" → "Beckham wakes from"
"She walks between" → "Beckham walks between"
MOS:QUOTE issues in the last para and repeated instances of full names when these have already been used

Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between credits and personnel

On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this went as expected! --K. Peake 20:45, 27 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

Kyle Peake Thanks for another amazing review! See my comment above. Alex ^{reach me!} 22:32, 27 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

By meaning of the song, I mean an analysis of sorts for the lyrical meaning please. K. Peake 07:26, 28 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

Kyle Peake I'm afraid there's no info on this other than the David Sinclair book one. Alex ^{reach me!} 03:23, 30 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

@Kyle Peake: Is there any updates for this review? Is there more things to be sorted, or are we done? — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 01:00, 26 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

✓ Pass now, I did some copy editing for you but this is ready to go! --K. Peake 06:46, 26 October 2023 (UTC)Reply