Talk:Letter of Pero Vaz de Caminha

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Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I hope to make to following edits and expansions to article:

-Give more historical and biographical information about Pêro Vaz de Caminha

-Give more context into Portugals political state in the 1500's and how this affected their intentions in Brazil

-Add more translated sections from the letter and give contextual information

-How was the letter received by the Portuguese monarchy and how did this affect their future expeditions in Brazil

-Improve the coherence of the actual writing in the article


Possible Sources:

-https://www.jstor.org/stable/1316707?seq=4#page_scan_tab_contents

-https://books.google.com/books?id=9mR2QXrVEJIC&pg=RA1-PA312

-http://www.jstor.org/stable/10.7829/j.ctt2jbncn.10?Search=yes&resultItemClick=true&searchText=Portuguese&searchText=colonisation&searchText=brazil&searchUri=%2Faction%2FdoBasicSearch%3FQuery%3DPortuguese%2Bcolonisation%2Bbrazil&refreqid=search%3A64bdf136b23e885b44b2e206679974b2&seq=1#page_scan_tab_contents

-http://www.jstor.org/stable/41105068?Search=yes&resultItemClick=true&searchText=16th&searchText=century&searchText=portugal&searchUri=%2Faction%2FdoBasicSearch%3FQuery%3D16th%2Bcentury%2Bportugal&refreqid=search%3A712fa5f5f7e76b1487645d88d1bd3906&seq=1#page_scan_tab_contents

-http://www.jstor.org/stable/3513430?Search=yes&resultItemClick=true&searchText=Pero&searchText=vaz&searchText=de&searchText=caminha&searchUri=%2Faction%2FdoBasicSearch%3FQuery%3DPero%2Bvaz%2Bde%2Bcaminha&refreqid=search%3A385002cd44dfa4add40123f09319c067&seq=1#page_scan_tab_contents

-http://www.jstor.org/stable/10.1525/sop.2011.54.4.593?Search=yes&resultItemClick=true&searchText=16th&searchText=century&searchText=portugal&searchUri=%2Faction%2FdoBasicSearch%3FQuery%3D16th%2Bcentury%2Bportugal&refreqid=search%3A712fa5f5f7e76b1487645d88d1bd3906 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nasua Labi (talkcontribs) 02:49, 24 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

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So 1 month later, I'm back and here to review. I like how you included the original Portuguese and the English translation. If I recall correctly, for the Portuguese in the first paragraph, you should put in brackets to signify that it was the original. Better yet, this format: (Portuguese: Arvoredo Tanto, e tamanho, e tão basto, e de tanta folhagem, que não se pode calcular) then include the English translation. For the content section where you discuss the letter, citations from the text would be a good idea. Otherwise, keep up the good work.Dnaugle21 (talk) 22:55, 2 April 2018 (UTC)Reply


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