Talk:Lexie Hull/GA1
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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 22:54, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
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editShe competed for Central Valley High School in Spokane Valley, Washington.
from what year to what year?
- Done.
She won the Associated Press
add the word "also" before won
- Done.
She became the first freshman in program history to register a double-double in their debut
this seems pretty important. Is there a news article with more detail than her basic bio?
- I could not find an article with more detail.
a freshman season-high
do you mean then season high for her or a freshman season high program record?
- This was the most points she scored in a game that season. I removed the repetition of "freshman."
She helped Stanford win the Pac-12 Tournament.
This seems like too short of a sentence. Can this be merged with her stats in the following sentence?
- Done.
- Sportzeditz, Everything else looks good. Please ping me when the changes are made. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 12:49, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
- @HickoryOughtShirt?4: I have addressed all of the points. Sportzeditz (talk) 15:33, 18 January 2022 (UTC)