I like the way the article is turning out, thanks mostly to ThinkBlue and his tireless efforts to improve it. However, the article could use some improvements, especially if it is going to become a "good article" on the rating scale. First, it needs a personnel section, with the band members and their roles as well as the technical crew (producer, mixer, etc.). Second, the track listing should use the tracklist template, incorporating the writers as well. Finally, the trivia section needs to be removed, and any notable, sourced information should be merged with the rest of the article. If all of that can be done, I will list it as a good article. We can then go from there to nominating it to A-Class, after making sure it is the best it can possibly be. Timmeh! 22:51, 10 March 2009 (UTC)Reply
One little change:
I'm not familiar with editing and formatting here yet so I'd rather let someone else fix this, but this, under personnel, lists Ryan Mendez as guitarist. Though he was added as a member near the end of the recording process, he does not appear on the album. Several guitar parts are attributed in the liner notes to Ben Harper, and in the documentary about the making of the album that shipped with some copies of the album, Pete Mosely is shown playing the guitar solo on Holly Wood Died. If someone could fix those little bits it would be great. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 129.137.153.124 (talk) 00:54, 7 November 2011 (UTC)Reply
