Talk:Ligiah Villalobos

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Dlobe1221 in topic Untitled

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In the last section titled "Critical Acclaim of La Misma Luna" You use the word its, when i believe it should be "it is a" and then the quote Dlobe1221 (talk) 05:22, 5 December 2016 (UTC)Dlobue1221Reply

Also, keep in mind that you should try and link any of the notable things in your article, such as "Sundance" and the large corporations that you mention, such as NBC and F/X. You do this by highlighting the word in question ad clicking on the chain link in the tool bar next to "Cite Dlobe1221 (talk) 05:26, 5 December 2016 (UTC)Dlobue1221Reply

In the section "Credits and Awards" You use the words "Humanitas" when i believe that you meant Humanities.

Overall, this article looks phenomenal and very informative and well written! good job! my only other comment would be for you to make it a little more aesthetically pleasing by maybe adding a picture or two throughout the article. Dlobe1221 (talk) 05:31, 5 December 2016 (UTC)Dlobue1221Reply