Talk:List of Canaan episodes

Plot Synopsis

I wrote the Plot synopsis for Episode 13, Please feel free to add/trim or completely rewrite it. 121.44.175.27 (talk) 02:17, 28 September 2009 (UTC)

Reassessed to B

It looks like everything is together and it doesn't look too far behind some of the Features lists. There was a note on the last assessment about the airdates being unsourced, however several of our FL's don't have a footnote next to them. Per WP:V, it doesn't really have to be footnoted unless it's likely to be challenged; though I'd recommend it if you go for GA.

• Make sure it's clear where the airdates came from
• Keep working on the introduction
• Get a few more english-language sources (if possible)

Looks good! --Kraftlos (Talk | Contrib) 13:28, 4 December 2009 (UTC)

There is no GL class in the Anime and Manga wikiproject, the next class if featured list (FL). Extremepro (talk) 05:47, 6 December 2009 (UTC)

Right... I always forget that lists are a special case. --Kraftlos (Talk | Contrib) 11:33, 14 January 2010 (UTC)

Edit the summaries

Thus, the last sentence: "Canaan and the other survivors went their separate ways after Alphard seemingly fell to her death from hanging onto Canaan's right arm. " Which sounds like Canaan lost her right arm, Alphard falling into the canyon holding on to it as she fell. What about the last scene with Canaan's new assignment? There are probably a lot more little glitches like that. Timothy Perper (talk) 10:43, 7 December 2009 (UTC)

Edit them all.

For example, from the first episode: "... before she defeats the rest of them [who?] without alerting and panicking the public with heightened senses in synesthesia. [The public doesn't have heightened senses of synesthesia; Canaan does. It should read something like "...panicking the public by using her heightened..."] Meanwhile, the CIA's SAD [What does "SAD" mean?] convoy comes under attack from an IED ambush [Who is IED? Don't use the link to define the term "IED" -- spell it out or say "bomb"] while transporting Alphard in their custody." [Their? Who are "they"?"]

I'm not going to do this because I have no idea what the author was driving at in a number of places. But all the summaries need work.

Timothy Perper (talk) 10:59, 7 December 2009 (UTC)

Did some of them. Ominae (talk) 00:32, 11 December 2009 (UTC)

Peer Review

I added some suggestions on how to improve the page here: Wikipedia:Peer review/List of Canaan episodes/archive1. Comment under the bullet points if you're done or have any questions. Extremepro (talk) 07:17, 11 December 2009 (UTC)