Talk:List of Seraph of the End chapters

copyedit

Hi, I've done copyedit on the article. I tried to smooth-out some of the phrasing in the plot, but I haven't read it myself (I've only watched two episodes of the anime). So most of my notes regard plot summaries:

1. Not sure of the difference between Hīragi and Hiragi, that might need to be checked.
2. From Vol 2 summary: "Shinoa makes Yu work together with Kimizuki. However, Yu convinces Kimizuki to visit his ill sister." I don't understand the relationship between the two sentences and the intended meaning of "however". That could benefit from some clarification.
3. In the Vol 5 summary, "in order to test Yu's background". I'm not sure if that should be "test Yu's resolve" or something similar, again, not sure of the intended meaning. Perhaps Yu is being interrogated?
4. Lest Karr is mentioned once in vol 6 with not much context. If he's a significant character, a little more could be added to explain who he is. If he isn't that notable, probably better not to name him and gloss-over that part.
5. In Vol 8 summary, "After Kimizuki teases him with his sliced arm". I would tend to assume that Kimizuki is taunting Wesker after slicing Wesker's arm – but this is manga and something unexpected could be going on there. I left it as-is.

I've put this article on my watchlist and will try to be available for follow-up. Reidgreg (talk) 17:59, 5 November 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for the copy-edit. However, I don't remember much about the manga. I'll try to address your concerns. I think you are correct about the last about Wesker's arm since the vampires can regenerate any wounds except for decapitations.Tintor2 (talk) 20:18, 5 November 2016 (UTC)

What happened?

The entire list is filled with premises written from quite a advertising way. I think I wouldn't be far from saying this page is filled now several copyright violations.Tintor2 (talk) 23:38, 1 May 2022 (UTC)