Talk:Little Things (One Direction song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 11:37, 10 February 2013 (UTC)

Info box

• Use the length template, like on "I Will Be"
•  Done — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)
• Put folk before pop, as f is before p

 Done — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

• Put the music video link as an External link in its own section at the bottom of the article

 Done — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

Lead

• "released in November 2012" → Say it was released on 11 November 2012 in its own sentence at the end of the para

 Done — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

• "with the quintet" → A lot of people won't know what this is, best to just say the band or One Direction

 Done — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

• shipments, not sales. See here.

 Not done; When comes to digital sales of singles, a certification denotes a number of sales. — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

No, some countries are sales, some are shipments. Hence why I attached the link for you.  — AARON • ^TALK

• "The vocal ensemble" → One Direction. Ensemble is more for clothing.

 Done — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

Critical response

• This section heavily focuses on the use of quotations. Several need to be in your own words or a mix of the two.
  • I'll see what I can do. — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

Live performances

• I made some little edits
  • Why did you remove UK from The X Factor; its just confusing now. — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

Weekly charts

• The Chart column needs the shading, like the Certification table

 Done — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

• 2012 peaks and 2013 peaks should be in separate tables.

 Done; all peaks where in 2012.. — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

Certifications

• The box should resemble this one

 Done — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

References

• FN2: Captial FM should not be in italics

 Done — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

• FN4: MTV News should not be in italics and the publisher is Viacom

 Done — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

• FN5: Don't SHOUT

 Done — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

• FN11: Has no publisher
• FN12: About.com should not be in italics

 Done — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

• FN13: Same as FN4 above and should not be linked as this is the second mention
• FN14: Has no publisher
• FN16: BBC should not be in italics

 Done — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

• FN17: Has no publisher
• FN18: Has no publisher
• FN19: Has no publisher
• FN20: Has no publisher
• FN21: Allmusic should not be in italics

 Done — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

• FN24: Don't SHOUT

 Done — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

• FN45: Has no work parameter

 Not done because it is a generic template. — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

• FN46: Allmusic should not be in italics

 Done — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

• FN48: Same as FN4. Why is the country suddenly being used?

 Done removed country as well; copy paste from 1D disco, where countries are always added. — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

• FN49: WP:TWITTER, remove as it is self published.

 Done — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

• FN51: Same as FN48

 Done — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

• FN52: Has no publisher
• FN54: Has no title, Idolator should not be in italics, and the publisher is missing

Partly  Done; italics — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

• FN56: Has no publisher and should not be linked as it already is in FN52

Partly  Done; delinked

• FN58: Has no publisher
• FN59: Has no publisher
• FN60: same as FN2

 Done — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

Publishers are needed to meet FA not GA; so I'm not adding them. — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

No, you can get away without having a work parameter if it is unknown, but not for publishers. All references, regardless of what it is for, need a publisher.  — AARON • ^TALK 22:50, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

Status

On hold for 7 days. Please pay attention to your reference formatting in the future.  — AARON • ^TALK 17:28, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing, Aaron! — Robin (talk) 22:47, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

OMFG!!!!!! I thought I had already saved the adjustments to the article before responding to your posts; I closed the tab without saving all the adjustments, thinking it was an old version of article I had left open. I'll be back 2morrow............ — Robin (talk) 23:00, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

I've done everything you want, I guess. — Robin (talk) 14:09, 16 February 2013 (UTC)

You haven't changed sales to shipments. All US certifications are according to shipments only.  — AARON • ^TALK 16:11, 16 February 2013 (UTC)

But the way I have written it now doesn't indicate that the RIAA denotes its sales or shipments. — Robin (talk) 16:21, 16 February 2013 (UTC)

But that's not the point. It's incorrect.  — AARON • ^TALK 16:22, 16 February 2013 (UTC)

Done — Robin (talk) 16:27, 16 February 2013 (UTC)

Actually Australia is also shipments. New Zealand is okay though, they base certifications on sales. This is a handy page to know.  — AARON • ^TALK 16:32, 16 February 2013 (UTC)

Did the Aussie cert as well. — Robin (talk) 16:36, 16 February 2013 (UTC)

Passing.  — AARON • ^TALK 16:37, 16 February 2013 (UTC)

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