Talk:Live (Usher album)/GA1
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Reviewer: Novice7 (talk) 04:47, 3 July 2011 (UTC)
- Lead
- 'Live is a live album by American rceording artist Usher. – typo.
- It was recorded on October 15 and 16 in the singer's hometown of Chattanooga, Tennessee, and released by LaFace Records on March 23, 1999. – October of which year? 1998? Please include that.
- nbsps needed (number 73, number 3 etc.)
- The album has sold over 200,000 copies, – where?
- Background
- Seven of the songs included on Live are from Usher's self-titled debut album (1994) and My Way. A medley of songs originally performed by Bobby Brown—"Don't Be Cruel", "Every Little Step", "Rock Wit'cha" and "Roni"—and Force MDs' "Tender Love" and LL Cool J's "I Need Love" are also on Live.[4] – can you tweak this sentence a bit?
Will continue later... Novice7 (talk) 05:06, 8 July 2011 (UTC)
- Critical
- Merge this and the next section and retitle to Reception? The commercial reception section section looks short.
- Good section.
- Commercial
- Some BB refs are missing accessdates.
- I don't add accessdates to print sources, as the URL is more of a convenience link, rather than the reference itself. Adabow (talk · contribs) 08:45, 9 July 2011 (UTC)
- The video of the performance of "Bedtime" was made available at MTV.com – source.
- Lol, oops. :P Adabow (talk · contribs) 08:45, 9 July 2011 (UTC)
That's all. Good luck. Novice7 (talk) 04:59, 9 July 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. All done. Adabow (talk · contribs) 08:45, 9 July 2011 (UTC)
- Great. Passing. Novice7 (talk) 10:04, 9 July 2011 (UTC)