Talk:Lord Corporation

Advertising style

I have gone through the article to remove any advertising-like wording. Please read through and make any other recommendations. If there are none, please remove the flag. Thanks

Smbrown123 (talk) 16:33, 30 January 2010 (UTC)

I went back and rewrote the article to be neutral. Please consider removing the flag. Thanks! 75.186.44.107 (talk) 20:59, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

NPOV

Wow, this article is written from the companies perspective. The refs are almost all the company's site. We need outside sources. Outback the koala (talk) 21:12, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

I will find more outside sources. Thanks for the input. Smbrown123 (talk) 01:22, 2 March 2010 (UTC)

We have done some major revisions to make sure this article has been written from a neutral point of view. Please remove the flag or tell us where you think the neutrality is compromised. Thank you. Wendyfables (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 14:48, 4 March 2010 (UTC).

Just following up on the status of these changes - please let me know if this is sufficient enough to remove the flags. Wendyfables (talk) 15:31, 16 March 2010 (UTC)

I've removed the NPOV tag. We don't really need it here at this time. Outback the koala (talk) 17:10, 16 March 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but the flag that says "this article was written as an advertisement.." is still visible - is there something further that I need to do? Wendyfables (talk) 9:58, 17 March 2010 (UTC)

Hi wendy, I read over the article and i think you're right. It's not really written like an ad, but the history section certainly needs a cleanup to make it an encyclopedic read. I'm going to tag that section only for cleanup and try to help edit myself to get it up to snuf, yknow. Outback the koala (talk) 03:38, 19 March 2010 (UTC)

Good evening - I went back through this and added some articles in the history section to help with the resources - and I saw your changes to the language - thanks! I made a few additional adjustments too. Please take a look and let me know if this is sufficient enough to get the flag removed. Thank you in advance. Wendyfables (talk) 20:39, 31 March 2010 (UTC)

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