Talk:Lorenzo Magalotti
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editHallo Attilios, the article looks very boring now, many thanks for your other edits. What is wrong with pictures of science and of places MAGALOTTI has been. Your lay-out is ugly. Taksen (talk) 03:12, 18 May 2010 (UTC)
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