Talk:Los Angeles County Flood Control District v. Natural Resources Defense Council, Inc.

Sources

http://legalplanet.wordpress.com/2013/01/09/la-river-supreme-court-opinion-narrow-or-broad-reaching/

Review Experts Terry Tamminen

Steve Fleischli (NRDC Director and Senior Attorney, Water Program) http://www.nrdc.org/about/staff/steve-fleischli — Preceding unsigned comment added by Captcrunch1 (talk • contribs) 03:27, 22 April 2013 (UTC)

EPA's Rule

Take a look at the EPA's Water Transfers Rule issued in 2008 here. You might want to add something about it. Aarf613 (talk) 21:02, 29 April 2013 (UTC)

April 29 Peer Review

Hi Guys, I reviewed your article for the April 29 assignment. Really good job overall! I was impressed. -I thought that in the parties section you may want to provide more of a description of the two parties (who they are, jurisdiction, etc). Currently I felt that the section just talked about details of the case.

-I also think you may want to try to combine or streamline the issues and background section. I thought they contained similar information.

-Add links to the further reading section or take it out.

-I thought the info you provided on the previous cases was really good, but is it too much for this articles topic? Should it be more of a quick summary in your article and then a dedicated separate article?

-Under arguments you only provided the NRDC argument. What was the districts argument or reasoning?

-Under see also you may want to put up the links to the parties web sites or wiki pages.

Overall a really good looking article. I hope my review is helpful. Kaylapaschal (talk) 00:11, 30 April 2013 (UTC)

A few general comments in addition to Kayla's points above...

- Overall really engaging format. Good use of images to support complex or more geographic material

- Minor edit: you have two #1s in the list

Jtreetree (talk) 04:57, 30 April 2013 (UTC)

Hello - Nice Article! Here are couple things to consider below.

- As mentioned above the South Florida Water Management District v. Miccosukee Tribe of Indians section is a bit lengthy. You might want to consider summarizing and adding a hyperlink to a page with more details if the reader wants further information.

-In the Parties section you start discussing the arguments, should this be in arguments section?

Overall the article flows very well and has a nice format.

bahodges —Preceding undated comment added 06:19, 30 April 2013 (UTC)

General comments by Stuartyeates

Please see general comments by User:Stuartyeates on articles generated by this class at Education Program talk:University of San Francisco/Environmental Law (Spring 2013)#Feedback_on_the_articles. Please respond there if you have any questions or comments. Dcoetzee 01:41, 2 May 2013 (UTC)

Wikipedia Ambassador Program course assignment

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