Talk:Louis Laybourne Smith

Wording

The article is GA and that is not going to change. But I did want to comment on the wording: "Laybourne Smith was just as happy to develop a sketch and to pass it on" is slightly POV in that you seem to be taking a side or a position rather than being neutral. Of course you are free to ignore my comment! (I didn't over look that, did I, during the review? Oh dear!) —Mattisse (Talk) 02:47, 4 February 2009 (UTC)

Oh! I missed this, so long ago. :) I'm sorry. I have no problem with changing it, but the wording is fairly close to the source, which, from memory, was a bit strong in the distinction. I'll check the source and see how it can be tidied up. - Bilby (talk) 05:39, 11 January 2010 (UTC)

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