Talk:Louis Upton

Latest comment: 4 years ago by EricAhlqvistScott in topic POV issues 29-JAN-2020

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I'm biased because I wrote it, but this was a solid 40 hour research project reviewing 20,000 newspaper mentions. Would love it to be considered. Reviewer: EricAhlqvistScott (talk · contribs) 03:56, 27 January 2020 (UTC)Reply

  • This review is going to be declined because the nominator has selected themselves as the reviewer, which cannot be done. I urge the nominator to re-nominate the article, taking care not to select themselves next time as the reviewer. Regards,  Spintendo  07:24, 29 January 2020 (UTC)Reply

POV issues 29-JAN-2020

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Much of the added information contains company-related minutiae which was published at a time when journalistic safeguards against conflicts of interest were not in place. Thus, the information gleaned from these primary source documents must be viewed with caution, while the article uses too many of them, and not enough WP:SECONDARY sources. I've placed the {{POV}} maintenance template to advise editors of the need for possible copyediting to further improve the article. Regards,  Spintendo  08:01, 29 January 2020 (UTC)Reply