Talk:Love Is Bigger Than Anything in Its Way

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Bilorv in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination

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@Bilorv: Removed per request. MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 00:01, 3 August 2018 (UTC)Reply
Thanks!   ALT0 approved. Bilorv(c)(talk) 00:08, 3 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

@Bilorv and MrLinkinPark333: I was about to move this to a prep, but the wording is a bit iffy in ALT0. How about: ... that it had been seventeen years since U2 topped the Billboard Dance Club Songs chart until "Love Is Bigger Than Anything in Its Way" peaked in July 2018? Anarchyte (work | talk) 09:51, 4 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

I've added a "that" to ALT0, but I don't see any other wording issues (possibly "had" could be "had had"). Your suggestion sounds quite strange to me—I don't like that use of "until". Change it to a "when" and I would be happy. Bilorv(c)(talk) 11:09, 4 August 2018 (UTC)Reply
@Bilorv: The problem with "had had" can be mitigated by changing it to the "topped" suggestion. I don't mind whether we use until or when. What do you say to ALT2:
ALT2: ...that it had been seventeen years since U2 topped the Billboard Dance Club Songs chart when "Love Is Bigger Than Anything in Its Way" peaked in July 2018? Anarchyte (work | talk) 11:35, 4 August 2018 (UTC)Reply
Yep, looks good to me! Bilorv(c)(talk) 11:58, 4 August 2018 (UTC)Reply
@Anarchyte: |If ALT2 works better with grammar, then I'll support it too. MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 15:50, 4 August 2018 (UTC)Reply
@Yoninah: I like the sound of that as well. Hopefully it does not lose the energy of the hook. I had issues with grammar before I submitted these hooks. Hope this third version work best. MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 23:20, 5 August 2018 (UTC)Reply
I also like ALT3. Anarchyte (work | talk) 02:25, 6 August 2018 (UTC)Reply
Same here. Bilorv(c)(talk) 12:03, 6 August 2018 (UTC)Reply
  Bilorv(c)(talk) 13:18, 6 August 2018 (UTC)Reply